Chahat ko teri hamne

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by DesiPride143, May 4, 2005.

  1. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    chahat ko teri hamne
    pyar ka naam diya
    aei bewafa tune
    mujhe kyun badnaam kiya

    saanso ko apni humne
    tere naam tha kiya
    un saanson ko tumne
    yuhin hawa mein uda diya

    taroon ki, ki tumne puch
    humne chaand laa diya
    humne tujhse pyaar kiya
    aur tune kisi aur ka naam liya

    aei bewafa, pyaar tha hamne
    tujhse kiya
    lakin humne bhi dil
    kisi aur ko tha diya... :dance:

    aziz
     
  2. smriti

    smriti // Silent Observer //

    the poem seemed really nice until this point....
    i thot ur really sad n all but u danced in d end..........omg!!! little weird poem!!!!........liked the twist in d end:)
     
  3. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    God job dp... as alwayz!

    U never seem to leave the 'funny' element out of anything!
    Hope you didnt write that while sleeping... ;)
    Keep it up!

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  4. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    hahaha...thanx guyz...
     
  5. lord_neo

    lord_neo Guest

    lol thats was quite good! I had no idea you had this in you...
     
  6. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    lolz...thanx neo
     

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