Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Aug 6, 2007.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    The rabbit face the plastic charm, even the innocence was crafted
    its all right and its good to see atlest, she must have laughed at
    why dont people simply ask, why choose a lofty sweet rhyme
    another pach of leather at the right place and the right time
    your dark hairs and dimples will be real good memory
    only that less space now, in that faceless treasury
    blue is the colour which all surrounds
    blue is all with in
    blue is all like and blue is you gave
    in blue we all fit in !!
    #iR@ likes this.
  2. maxeffect

    maxeffect New Member

    Dude, watever u write make an impact, but many time i fail to understand wat actually u meant :boff: . Maybe bcoz i'm at different level of writing than u are at. So next time pls explain wat u write or at least give a context on wat u r writing.. ;)
  3. #iR@


    reps coming ur way sir! AMAZING! :)
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    is it reaally un-understandable ?

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