Blind Sight

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Zafar, Feb 15, 2005.

  1. Zafar

    Zafar New Member


    It ain't easier to see from close
    Than to see from far away
    I know who I am
    All you know is what I say

    Look beyond the surface
    Forget to see with your eyes
    Listen to my heartbeat
    That's where the power lies

    The mind is a chasm of thought
    From the heart come pure feelings
    Follow that heart and seeing
    Will hold a whole new meaning

    Quality of life lies not in material
    Not all that glitters is gold
    If the cap fits, you should wear it
    If it's too big, it'll blind your soul


    (2x speed of regular verse)
    Things always spin round
    And they come straight back to you
    You want me to live the dreams
    I never wanted to

    Life can't be forced upon me
    It's essence is freedom
    Without Liberty
    Living would have no reason

    (Chorus melody)
    And maybe I will never be
    All of the things you wanted to see
    I'm not living my life for you
    I live for me

    Zafar Sacranie
  2. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    Man zafar that was really good... I really identified with some lines out there.... great work, man.
  3. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    I feel the exact same way...I wrote something that stresses the same point, maybe I'll share with you sometime. Keep writing...
  4. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Nice song. Really liked it. Keep posting.
  5. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Nice song dude. Loved it, keep posting man.
  6. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    ooo nice work there:)
  7. Zafar

    Zafar New Member

    Thanks a lot everybody. I'll get some more of my stuff up there. Eventually I'll have a link to an mp3 file or something, once I can sing and play better, that's what I'm really working on. It's tough stuff, but pretty much everything is difficult in the beginning. That'd be great if you could share your writing with me Rey.

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