Black tears

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by shashankgothic, Jun 30, 2009.

  1. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    A tear fell from my face
    Making myself a disgrace
    Not wanting for it to be seen,
    My weakness from within

    My eyes are covered with black
    Hiding the gloom at the back
    Blurring my visions,
    Only seeing illusions

    Nothing in this world is real,
    As well as what I feel
    So tired of shedding these tears
    Along with my heartaches & fears

    All the pain & sorrow
    From yesterday ‘til tomorrow
    Hoping it would all be over
    Even though it seems forever
     
  2. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    koi hai?????????
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    See man this had nothing good...its sooo lame !!!
    i have seen some poster of this sort with a girl - black makeup - dead eyes and a tear

    i mean be orignal ...or ... dont write !
     
  4. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    what the ****kkkk ...... u mean i hv copied ..... excuseme i think u hv copied all ur poems .. now how does it feel dude
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ok may be i didnt put point well...im not saying u copied .. its like if i write ..ur face is like the morning glow, ur lips r like rose petals, ur hairs make the evening come, ur eyeblinks make my heart beat double...it like soo common ...soo many people have said the same thing ...!
    i intend to encourage u; write something which u really feel and you would find its like ur fingure print

    may be im wrong
     
  6. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    k thanxxx dude to encourage me so much....
    srrrrry ..... i thought u said i hv copied,
     
  7. iluvmuzik

    iluvmuzik New Member

    wow man the poems damn deep....
     
  8. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    ty man ithought igt is closed lol
     
  9. igt's this corner is actally the dark alley

    a very few come

    and its damp............i love the dampness of this place



    keep posting
     
  10. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    thanks yaar.... koi toh hai who loves my little dark world
     

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