As i'm getting better with the guitar day by day, i started writing songs also, and i've been writing a lot! Comments, suggestions? Bicycles Listen to the sounds, They make me aware. The lushness is crisp. I'll try not to stare. She winds into the heart, turns around, but she's blind in the dark. I see the time having effect. How many she serves. I'm but one of many. Idiling her soft curves. She stops for no one. Nor starts for no one. I'm but one of many. As her air trickles through my hair.
Thanks, i'll try to get better and better, and hopefully when my knowledge of song construction grows i'll be able to write some music to the songs too! That'll be something!