bhool aaye hai..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, Apr 7, 2006.

  1. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    since i was not happy wit http://www.indianguitartabs.com/showthread.php?t=20669
    i gave it a second try...writting this poetry..


    bhool aaye hai..

    apni thi mitti,apna tha jahaan..
    dur dur jo dekhe, bass apna aasmaan..
    abb palke uthaye, sab nayaa sa lagta hai..
    nayaa ye jahaan paraaya sa lagta hai..

    iss anjaane sheher me,apni pehchaan banaane..
    hum sapnon ko dene manjil door aaye hai..
    zindagi ki majdhaar, tamannaon ki kashti..
    par aisaa lagtaa hai, hum saahil bhool aaye hai..

    bachpan ki yaadein,mamata ki chadar..
    sharaarat ke kisse, badon ka aadar..
    abb naye se log hai,kuch naye tareeke..
    anjaane logon ke anjaane saleekein..

    kuch umeede, kuch sapne,palkon pe bichaaye..
    hum sapnon ko karne, haasil door aaye hai..
    chiraag roshan hai hazaaron yahaa pe..
    par gum hai ke hum apnon ki mehfil bhool aaye hai..

    jawani ke jalwe,kuch kamsin iraade..
    dosti aur yaari,pehle pyaar ke waade..
    rah rah ke aati hai, yaad wo baatein..
    unke saath gujari, dilkash woh raatein..

    aaj thaam ke sab yaadein, kuch karne ke zidd me..
    ek naye zindagi me hone, shaamil door aaye hain..
    dhadkanon ki talaash me nikle hai lekin..
    najaane kyu hum apnaa, dil bhool aaye hain..
     
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  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Beautiful Lines...
    Excellent poem..

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  3. urs_nir

    urs_nir New Member

    gr8...

    that was excellent....
    i loved ur poem.....bcoz thts so mch true 4 me!

    i would try to compose and make a song outta it!!! do u mind....;)
     
  4. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    it indeed was better than the previous one....beautiful...
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh


    main ek typical ghar vala comment deta hoon hann "itna dimak Padhayii main lagati jo jaane kyaa ban jati".......tu ladkiyoon ke liye hi likh haan.....jo itna kuch soochega na vo ghar chood ke nahi jaye ga.....and when ur out u only feel this kinda feeling on certain instances, ocassions and not such big things very smaal thing like....u accidently do some thing ppl ask who told u to do it and u say ur mom..then u get that emotional kick
     
  6. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Hey Nimisha, what do U do the whole day? Just write poems? :)

    Excellent!
     
  7. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    ^^she is the FL ;)
    @nimisha.....This was better...much much better...:nw:
     
  8. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    @zoom... speechless for u..as ever..

    @nir.. ya plz..compose n let me know how my poem turned into a song..
    no probs for me at all...

    @garima.. thanks:nw:

    @madhuresh.. :think: dont worry bout my studies dear.. i manage it quite well..;)
    or its not easy to be in med field without atmost dedication..:p:
    n i dont think...what u said is completely right..
    there r many people who miss their home wit intensity that i described in the poem.. its just different people... different opinion..

    @sanju..thanks for the compliments..
    par pataa nahi.. saare log aisa kyu sochte hai..ke i write too much..:annoyed:
    arree yaar..meri hobby hai.. mera fav kaam hai.. aur poem likhnekeliye jyada time bhi nahi lagtaa,when it comes deep from ur heart.. so i keep on writting..

    @hardik...
    oops i was not aware of that..
    thanks for reminding.. i'm FL.. ;)
    always waiting for replies from u.. thanks..:nw:
     
  9. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Yes U are rite..... it doesn't take much time to write poems when it's straight frm the heart.....

    Earlier I used to write a lot of poems........ but now those days are gone..... and I myself don't know that it's gud or bad.....
     
  10. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    ^^u shud post it..
    let others decide..rather than guessing on ur own..
     
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  11. arpi

    arpi New Member

    nimi di.... i love this one very much...reminded me of myself...shayad harr pardesi relate kar sakta hai is poem se... tfs ...loved the other one too but love this one too
     
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  12. souman_das

    souman_das New Member

    hi nimisha,
    excellent stuff,i really liked it.
    it really touched me deep inside.

    reps coming your way.


    regards,
    Souman
     
  13. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    @arpi.. thankie thankie..

    @souman.. glad u could relate to this poem..thanks
     

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