bewafa pe dil lutaate rahe

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by born2tab, Jan 24, 2007.

  1. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    aapna samajh kar unhe hum chaahte rahe
    be-reham se khud ko bhehalate rahe
    tadapte rahe..... naam bhi na le sake unka
    chaah mein unki khud ko jalate rehe
    Dil ki takdir hi aise hai
    Khud ko samjhate rahe....

    na miloge tum phir bhi maanta nahi mera man
    mannat tume pane ki ...maangte rahe
    apne dekhe hue sapno ki hakikt ke liye
    hum ret per gharonde sajathe rahe
    jab kho doge tab pechanoge
    tha saccha motiyo sa pyaar
    jise tum per lutate rahe


    Was jus feeling lonely...isliye likh dala....:eek::
     
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  2. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Reps added.
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    the poem is good par
    hum ret per gharonde sajathe rahe...this line has been said the same way by millions and zillions yahi kuch naya soochana tha app ne nahi soocha....
    word power made easy for urdu and hindi wil be a good option ye darjan bhar line ek falsafe main aajati...main example deta hunn
    Har ke kehne se iraada nahi badla karte
    har saheli se dupatta nahi badla karte
    vo shayad bhool gaye hain abb hum ko
    abb khidki se parde nahi badla karte....
     
  4. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    thanx @i_m_not_neo and madhuresh...
    @madhuresh-- will definitely try to improvise next time :)
     

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