I might be crying but its all fake Our break up, wasn't such a mistake. EVen though we wasted time, now i can get on with my life. Maybe i'll find someone new, someone who's love is true. My tears may fall but i'll end up laughing after it all. once i realize, that it was never love. And you weren't the one i had always dreamed of. So here i am, i am new, Im breathing, Smiling, im happy and its all without you.
@ notty: tu sudhrega nai.... @ spy: i would like it if u comment on my poem too.... @ anum And monica: Thanks...
gud one ...repped ya .. kya baat hai..for the previous some days i have been on a repping spree.. Has the talent on igt increased or :think:
@sanju_strings: thanks, i'll surely stay happy @born2tab: thanx a lot for the reps.... finally i got some... *yay* @zicky: thanx for reading and appreciating...
Wow,nice poem...really liked it...and I don't mean it in an offending way but its way better than "lonely users"... "once i realize, that it was never love. And you weren't the one i had always dreamed of." This is just one stanza I din't like though...it sorta feels like you're just convincing yourself that it wasn't meant to be while the rest of the poem just makes you feel that you were relieved of a "burden"... "So here i am, i am new, Im breathing, Smiling, im happy and its all without you." My favourite part...very original..very positive.it makes you realize that llife moves on.. Reps.
@im_not_neo: thanks a lot...and ya lonely users was a lame poem, but its ok u learn from ur mistakes.. :..
You remind me of one of my best friends. About the controversial verse once i realize, that it was never love. And you weren't the one i had always dreamed of. I interpret this as you're still heart-broken because you're saying that you'll do the other things only once you realize....meaning you haven't realized it yet. You're just telling yourself everything else to be able to look beyond this point where you're still dreaming about "him" (?) This would then make me look at the poem in a whole new light where you're lying about everything that you said except this verse. This would mean that you're crying because you're heart broken and not because you're pretending to be heart broken. If this is the way you meant it, kudos to you. If I've just read too much into it, I'm sorry but I like my interpretation better than yours. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you.
hey thanks.. i m happy u enjoyed reading it... regarding the controversial verse i would say that i just kept on writing the verses as the thoughts came to my mind... may be at that verse i was still thinking about him and then started forgetting him and moved on with life... its a transition from one state to another... (ya i m a science student)... but anyways ur way of interpreting was not bad either.. thanks again..
<3 Can I hit on you please? Seriously speaking, If this was written naturally...perhaps subconsciously you weren't over it? Or maybe I'm just reading way too much into it.
