Behte hai aansoo to behne do....

I decided not to post this poem here...but then, I think this is the best place to share what I feel....so here u go...another sad poem by Me.

Behte hai aansoo to behne do
Is dard ko is dil me hi daba rehne do
Ise zaahir karne se hamein kya haasil hoga
Tanha the ham, tanha hi rehne do

Mat aao pas hamare
Ki yeh toote dil ke kaante chubh sakte hain tumhare
Mat badao yun haath apna
Yeh haath unhe thaame bina reh nahi payenge
Aakhir tumse jhoot bolke ham kahan jayenge

Mat kaho ke sath doge tum hamara
Mat kaho ki dard ye gum ho jayega sara
Bharosa karna chahte hai par kar nahi payenge
Aakhir tumse bewafa hoke ham kahan jayenge

Peete aaye hai ye dard, toh akele hi peene do
Ise hamein aise hi bardasht karne do
Tumhare sath ise baantne se ye kam nahi hoga
Waqt ke sath hi is zakhm ko bharne do....

Thanx for reading

 

Its nice....

May be Its a repetitive comment in ur poetry threads ...bt cant help..u write really well ...

 

Thanks Apurba...comments doesnt really matter ...as far as u read the poem & are not disappointed... Thanx

 

well wat can i say....a nice poem written in gloom of sadness.....gud job CRAZY.

 

awesome as always...though i dont believe in what you have written,its expressed really nicely...

i still want you to try and write more happy-happy..

 

wait ..il send u my pic now....u must see funny things in the morning...so see my pic in the mornin everyday and be cheerful the entire day..in tht way ul never be sad............

 

I can get a feel wats goin thru ur mind while writin this .. but i'l jz keep dat to muhself .. Nice lines written i must say .. though i would want u to reconsider 2nd lines of both stanza 2 and stanza 3 .. donno wat more to say ..

EDIT: LOL abhi !!!!!

 

Hey dear


Behte hai aansoo to behne do
Is dard ko is dil me hi daba rehne do
Ise zaahir karne se hamein kya haasil hoga
Tanha the ham, tanha hi rehne do

Mat aao pas hamare
Ki yeh toote dil ke kaante chubh sakte hain tumhare
Mat badao yun haath apna
Yeh haath unhe thaame bina reh nahi payenge
Aakhir tumse jhoot bolke ham kahan jayenge

Mat kaho ke sath doge tum hamara
Mat kaho ki dard ye gum ho jayega sara
Bharosa karna chahte hai par kar nahi payenge
Aakhir tumse bewafa hoke ham kahan jayenge

Peete aaye hai ye dard, toh akele hi peene do
Ise hamein aise hi bardasht karne do
Tumhare sath ise baantne se ye kam nahi hoga
Waqt ke sath hi is zakhm ko bharne do

liked the poem..
its good dear...u write well..
*hugs* tk care

 

hey garima
u r awesome......
u write exactly what i feel....... but u kno m not a writer....
or may b can't think so deeply.....
so this time u deserves lots n lots of applause...
and love...
abhi

 

pyar karne ki chahat to thi
par daga tum de jaoge yeh socha na tha
saath nibhane ki thaani to thi
par zindagi daga de jayegi yeh socha na tha

Still trying to feel the hurt n pain behind the poem. Very well written !!

 

Nice one garima...But why the hell all girls so sad 4!Making it look like us lads are harsh..Lol...
Gettin back to your poem its really good keep it up!

 

:RollLol: :RollLol:

 

@ Pamposh....thanks alot.

@Hardik....now i will :grin:

@Abhi....c'mon dood i hv seen ur pics...u dont luk that funny

@Mohsin....i just hv one word for u....Thanks:grin: :grin:

@Martina ...Keep visiting

@Abhi...Thanx soooooo much...for being a regular, when it comes to reading my poems.

@Varshita :nw: for those lines....awesome...& Thanx

@Broken_heart....well i have just two thngs to say
1) Thanks u for liking the poem
2) ur user name says exactly the opposite of wat u said....it seems that all gals brk guy's heart....which is not true....all i believe is that paancho ungliyan barabar nai hoti...so evry1 shud get a fair chance.


Thanks everyone

 

ailaa...2 2 abhi.....

 

Lovely poem...garima !Keep it goin

 

@Abhi...LOL....tera naam copy righted hai kya...ki kissi or ka nai ho sakta :RollLol:

@ Fatima...thanx for reading it.

 

Seems like.. !! girls like to be sad... even though there is nothing to be sad about. !! and the poem can make the person about whom the poem is written a big time "Creep" .. !! (is it always necessary to generalize the emotions ???)


@ everyone sorry.. my personal opinion.. nothing against anyone..!!

 

Men are like Mascara

@ everyone sorry.. my personal opinion.. nothing against anyone..!!
Martian comes in peace ..sorry i meant Martina..usual typo

 

Rofl !!! i liked that @ martina.. !! good good

 

you people run at the first sign of emotion..
Thats why Mascara..
stinking stale!!!...i guess most men know that already: