befikrr Zindagi

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Jan 18, 2006.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Title :befikrr Zindagi

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    befikrr zindagi hai, dekha nahi kinara
    khaaboon ke baadshah hain, faankoon pe hai guzara

    thukra de abb to tu bhi, koi bahana kar ke
    ghar se nikal gaye to saara jaha humara

    hai cigarette dhoopbatti, god ne bheji hai khud hi
    us ke-liye jalatain hai, jis ne jaha savara

    Shikvaa hai tum ko gar ye ,main aata nahi huun milne
    Ek baar khud se poochoo kyaa tum-ne kabhi pukara

    befikrr zindagi hai, dekha nahi kinara
    khaaboon ke baadshah hain, faankoon pe hai guzara

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  2. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    i like the way u use urdu.
    i wish if i could knew that much of urdu..
    btw nice one..u wrote there...!
     
  3. ayad

    ayad New Member

    yeah gr8 man well i know its not a shayari thread but still dis one is from me
     
  4. ayad

    ayad New Member

    befikrr zindagi ka khatma hota hai bohat kharab
    nagaane yeah zindagi kab degi maat

    bhatak te raho ge na mile koi saath
    issliye fikr karna seekh lo var dene walana hoga koi haath

    mein ne to u soocha tha ke abb na karon ga koi ghalti
    jeonga jab tak jab tak chale gi zindagi

    koi ghalat na failsela hoga mera
    chahe woh faisela ho mera ya tera

    dis sher was actually made with da title
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    @nim....sweety dont worry the pace with which u r writing, soon all these words will be at ur service ....4 me this all came 'cause of the envoirment i am in.........

    and ayad 1989 is not the year of birth for some one who can understand this .......... but i like beng teased by kids..... actually i like this innocence.......innocence is the only thing which can not be cultivated pure and beautiful ...... will not share with u waht purpose this poem serves ..... cuse that will curbe some amount of the thing i like most in people .....forget this poem and thanx for ur valuable comments
     
  6. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    really nice madhuresh... i always felt u have lot of potential in poetry.. and u proved it once more
     
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Visva_.....Bhai mere tu to aisi bateen mat kar....;).... abhi to kuch funny likhna hi padega...
     

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