It starts to get boring, even when there is a lot of fun It becomes a hard load, with the fake smile i had shown I miss you with every breath, which reminds me that i exist I think about stopping it and bring forth the death or cut the missing that i cant resist being with you has opened my eyes that being without you will be a mess of such fact, I now realize loving you i will never grow less.
wah wah.......but ur not good in this language, i suppose....u knw tanhaayii judaiii pe kuch bhi lihogi .....vo chineys dekhe ga (i mean sab ekk sa) ...so cloths r important....vaise reps added and if ur not familiar to this place, yaha sab sacchaii ki puunch hain....thoda bhi idhar udhar kihoo to vaat laga dete hain...haha
@Rani, i beg a thousand pardons for indulging myself without permission and editing the poem to what i see as an improved version. If you do not like it, by all means, verbally curse me and revert back to the original version. Good attempt, simple and nice, i liked it.
if its such after editing then..erm..nothing! :grin: Good Effort!!..i will rep u! btw..if ur name is rani then y do u have aishwarya rai in ur avvy? make that rani mukherjee...ah what am i blabbering...i have become a lil excitd after reading ur poem .............
thank u all but i dont understand ur lang. an` about the langu...believ it or not am an English student(; but i like it to be that way,, and vini yes i am Rani but not that Rani am somthng like a queen or i dont know,,,
[Q]and vini yes i am Rani but not that Rani am somthng like a queen or i dont know,,,[Q] accha Royal blood cahlo ek aur..u know mere dadaji bhi zamindaar thae....Vo kabhi land sealing cases main gaye hi nahi (shaan ke khilaaf) aur humari saari jayezaat chali gayi.....my father says mere ander unn ke bahuut se gunn hain *sigh*.....HAHAHA ye shero-shayari hai hi Rayisi shauuk... and dont worry abt language ....yaha sab se kharaab language meri hai....i bet u can not beat me
oh yah i understand now the indian lang. mad ,,,,, >>>>>>>>>she doesnot understand it AT ALL but however thank u D;
nothing but i dont understand it bcoz am not speaking it... u may wonder whts bring me here in ((indian,,,,,))anyways...!!!!
oye, tu ye ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, aisa mat likh this should be ................... ok and y shud we wounder y r u here jabhi hume hi nahi pata ki humm yaha kyoon hain ....AVARAPAN....
@ rani.... VERY NICE POEM... i guess u r new here... welcoem to IGT! hope u have an amazing time here but i guess u might have some difficulties as u don't know hindi but don't worry... everyones here to help u... everyone just tries to bully newcomers! hehe... (madhuresh get back to normal! : ) @ others.... I KNOW I KNOW..... i have to be studying... and i am! u gUYS PRAY FOR ME!!! really working my ____ off! just opened this thread and really felt like replying... its been AGES since i posted here... OK OK I AM LEAVING.. bYE PPL.... PRAY FOR ME...:nw: i haven't slept, i haven't eaten, i can't breath, i am DEAD!!! can't wait till the 15th!!!!!!! tc ppl!
