,,,,,be honest ,,and tell me ur opinion(;

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by **Rani**, May 4, 2006.

  1. **Rani**

    **Rani** --DawnyGal--

    It starts to get boring, even when there is a lot of fun
    It becomes a hard load, with the fake smile i had shown
    I miss you with every breath, which reminds me that i exist
    I think about stopping it and bring forth the death
    or cut the missing that i cant resist
    being with you has opened my eyes

    that being without you will be a mess
    of such fact, I now realize loving you i will never grow less.
    vini and madhuresh like this.
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    wah wah.......but ur not good in this language, i suppose....u knw tanhaayii judaiii pe kuch bhi lihogi .....vo chineys dekhe ga (i mean sab ekk sa) ...so cloths r important....vaise reps added ;)
    and if ur not familiar to this place, yaha sab sacchaii ki puunch hain....thoda bhi idhar udhar kihoo to vaat laga dete hain...haha
  3. magicalaks

    magicalaks New Member

    yeh kya tha bhai?
  4. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    @Rani, i beg a thousand pardons for indulging myself without permission and editing the poem to what i see as an improved version. If you do not like it, by all means, verbally curse me and revert back to the original version. Good attempt, simple and nice, i liked it.
  5. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    if its such after editing then..erm..nothing! :grin:

    Good Effort!!..i will rep u!

    btw..if ur name is rani then y do u have aishwarya rai in ur avvy? make that rani mukherjee...ah what am i blabbering...i have become a lil excitd after reading ur poem

  6. **Rani**

    **Rani** --DawnyGal--

    thank u all

    but i dont understand ur lang.

    an` about the langu...believ it or not am an English student(;

    but i like it to be that way,,

    and vini yes i am Rani but not that Rani am somthng like a queen or i dont know,,,
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    [Q]and vini yes i am Rani but not that Rani am somthng like a queen or i dont know,,,[Q]

    accha Royal blood cahlo ek aur..u know mere dadaji bhi zamindaar thae....Vo kabhi land sealing cases main gaye hi nahi (shaan ke khilaaf) aur humari saari jayezaat chali gayi.....my father says mere ander unn ke bahuut se gunn hain *sigh*.....HAHAHA
    ye shero-shayari hai hi Rayisi shauuk...
    and dont worry abt language ....yaha sab se kharaab language meri hai....i bet u can not beat me
  8. **Rani**

    **Rani** --DawnyGal--

    oh yah i understand now the indian lang.:mad: mad


    >>>>>>>>>she doesnot understand it AT ALL

    but however thank u D;
  9. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    i love rani mukherjeeee......say ur r rani mukherjee...

    hey and nice poem there...good...
  10. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    whats wrong wid our "langu"..???!!!! :eek::
  11. **Rani**

    **Rani** --DawnyGal--

    but i dont understand it bcoz am not speaking it...

    u may wonder whts bring me here in ((indian,,,,,))anyways...!!!!
  12. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    oye, tu ye ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, aisa mat likh this should be ...................
    and y shud we wounder y r u here jabhi hume hi nahi pata ki humm yaha kyoon hain ;)....AVARAPAN....
  13. #iR@


    @ rani.... VERY NICE POEM... i guess u r new here... welcoem to IGT! :) hope u have an amazing time here but i guess u might have some difficulties as u don't know hindi but don't worry... everyones here to help u... everyone just tries to bully newcomers! hehe... (madhuresh get back to normal! :p: )

    @ others.... I KNOW I KNOW..... i have to be studying... and i am! u gUYS PRAY FOR ME!!! really working my ____ off! just opened this thread and really felt like replying... its been AGES since i posted here... OK OK I AM LEAVING.. bYE PPL.... PRAY FOR ME...:nw: i haven't slept, i haven't eaten, i can't breath, i am DEAD!!! can't wait till the 15th!!!!!!! tc ppl!
  14. **Rani**

    **Rani** --DawnyGal--

    i guess there`s smthng happening btwn u ppl ,,,,,

    ,,,,IR welcome back;p
  15. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    honest opinion=sweet, nice, cute..

    not you..! i mean ur poem.
  16. **Rani**

    **Rani** --DawnyGal--

    yaaaaaaaaaaaaaah that`s opinion i like the most ;p

    nimisha i guess y have good taste :)

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