Bas itna hai...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Aug 12, 2006.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Just think of u and and i get a smile
    u know jo aisae-hi, makes u 'kush' for a while
    par dreams and hakiquat never combine
    Bas itna hai rest all is fine....

    mostly when u live pass pass, bas hellow hi for long
    never talked that way, but the bond is strong
    it never gets obvious it never gets prime
    Bas itna hai reat all is fine......

    when they talk about those tales, a beauty and a guy
    In my mind i cant find else, just u and i
    now as we part will apart my ablity to relate to those lines
    Bas itna hai rest all is fine....

    though its a long life, dont knw if i can forget
    surely breath my last with this single regret
    u were there but i culdnt make u mine
    Bas itna hai rest all is fine....
     
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  2. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    ^^^lol..

    i shud appreciate the poem for such a innovative writing style..
    lol.. its funny but cute too.. btw, ye kaun si lingo hai??
     
  3. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    yeah..funny indeed..quite different

    reps for makin me laugh
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    itna funny kyaa hai iss main.........:(
     
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  5. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    PaD kar bahout mazaa aaya...!

    Keep it up. Madhu Bhai

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ^thanks...
     
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  7. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    AWESOME MAN! VERY DIFFERENT indeed! ;)
     
  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :shock: improvement in ur writing skills towards a positive side.....goooood :grin:
     
  9. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    thanks gandi bacchi...and Garima ji ye app ne kaise conclude kiya that i have improved ?
     
  10. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    i always liked your fusion
    sab thik hi hai :)
    loved the last stanza
     
  11. nils

    nils New Member

    hey nice poem, but yaar, why did you change your writing style in the last two para.
    i mean the first two para were very distince to the last ones in terms of the language.
     
  12. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    thax bubbly....yahi to thik nahi ki sab thik hi rehe..;)
    nils ...hmm ...yaar pata nahi jo dil main aaya likh diya bas ..thoda chage sa hai to ...abhi hai to hai ..lekin i suppose rest all fine ?
     

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