I am so sorry to hear about your grandmother. May God bless her soul and give you the strength to overcome what life may bring in time.
^ Its not like ur other poems... it struggles too much with the composition and flow ... Well, I gather the feelings overcame u , and u were not able to translate those feelings properly into the poem .... hope ur grandma gets well soon
I wouldn't call it a poem...it doesnt have all the ingredients but as i said in my first post...jst wanted to share and i guess cdnt do that properly.
Nice thoughts you could've done better.. i dont agree to the title and the use of the phrase "bag of bones" but enough has been said on that... Hope your grandmother gets well soon God bless
thxs for ur reply Bubbly but as far as title is concerned I wdnt change it since its very important part of what i wanted to express. point taken though.
