bad day...:/ :.

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Nov 24, 2009.

  1. bad day


    its a very very bad day, u knw like really really bad
    its a very very sad day, u knw like really really sad

    i plan i'll live it like this
    then i change my plans to that
    watch myself in the mirrors to choose
    a face that make's impact

    even my cloting and my hair style
    should play their skilful part
    i move in time dont loose a dime
    reherse it from the start..

    casue its a
    its a very very bad day, u knw like really really bad
    its a very very sad day, u knw like really really sad

    i wont tell any one anyting
    i just wont even talk
    will keep up awful manners
    will go for long walks

    this all will attract attention
    all will talk of me
    then wehen i return with my aura
    they will all be family

    casue its a
    its a very very bad day, u knw like really really bad
    its a very very sad day, u knw like really really sad

    then i will recite my heart felt story
    in exaga-rating tone
    make all kinds of eye movements
    and wont even touch my phone

    now when they reach their consoling limits
    give a smile to all as if now glad
    this cover will hide my story
    the real story i had

    taht its a very very bad day....u knw like really really bad
     
  2. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    ??? is this poetry ??? i might never be able to write again if this is called poetry
     
  3. okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
    another try

    I'm nobody! Who are you?
    Are you nobody, too?
    Then there's a pair of us - don't tell!
    They'd banish us, you know!
    How dreary to be somebody!
    How public like a frog
    To tell one's name the livelong day
    To an admiring bog!



    How do u think this is?

    Please do post ur openion Mr. Great Poet
     
  4. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

  5. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    ...and ya better luck next time...
     
  6. it ws just a small trap ..u didnt fell for it ...k ....but that dosent make u a genious ..bo bo

    if ur soo artistic ...y dont u give it a try and post someting here ...lests see Mr poet...vaise bhi critiques r transparent people 4 me....waht say????
     
  7. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    If you're interested then u can visit my blog...link is there in my signature..
     

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