hello ppl... another poem... just realllyy simple this time... do comment ppl... BAD DAY! There r days that u never forget they could be good or bad but u just never forget how u lived through that day without any single hand to hold u how u were alone throughout the day even when u thought u had friends but I am sorry it all proved wrong that day was hard harder than u think but then how would u know consider urself as me and u would have gone astray then why do u keep telling me; “not to do this and that” When u don’t even know How I go through every single day! thx for reading... and looking fwd to ur comments!
@IR, the elegance of your poems lies in their simplicity and the ability to get the thoughts and emotions across wonderfully, i, for one can never achieve that as well as you do. WEll done girl, very well done.
@ hardik... THANKS A LOT! its always a pleasure reading ur comments! :nw: reallyyyyyy make me rite more! @ disturbed... yaar mera naam tu likha ker... its not IR its #iR@= HIRA! hehe : THANKS man! always looking forward to ur comments.. each and every word u said means a lot! luv wat u rite man! awesome ritter u urself r! thanks again man! :nw:
beautiful...... see, me no alone every one is all round... have even a coin to flic and let rotate all around... but dont u go crazy u little coin just stop making so loud sound....
hm......i neednt say anything..coz i have to repeat it again..very good.....hope u have good days always....
hey ye main chori kiyaa... i heard a poet say that it's lot of ppl all around and he's over-flowing with company...but he could hear the colck tic...tic tic.....i mean it reveals taht how vaccumed was his inner self in a flash....its a good idea to exploit hai na ?
@ madhuresh.... thx a lot man! yea... wat u rote was something quiet deep...(about the guy) @ abhi... ab kya kahoon..... THANKSSSSsss!!!!! :nw:
@ tanuja... firstly welcome to IGT! and thx for the appreciation! @ pamposh... thx man! :rock: bus kya bataoon.... just a lot of ppl at the same time... but don't worry everythings good now!
Good to kno that evrythng is good now....hope it remains same forever... Poem was nice as it always is .....from U
