Bad Day!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Mar 31, 2006.

  1. #iR@


    hello ppl... another poem... just realllyy simple this time... do comment ppl...

     BAD DAY!

    There r days
    that u never forget
    they could be good or bad
    but u just never forget

    how u lived through that day
    without any single hand to hold u
    how u were alone
    throughout the day
    even when u thought u had friends
    but I am sorry it all proved wrong

    that day was hard
    harder than u think
    but then how would u know
    consider urself as me
    and u would have gone astray

    then why do u keep telling me;
    “not to do this and that”
    When u don’t even know
    How I go through every single day!

    thx for reading... and looking fwd to ur comments!
    Hardik likes this.
  2. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    its gr8 that you put everything u feel in ur poems....keep writing gurl!!
  3. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    @IR, the elegance of your poems lies in their simplicity and the ability to get the thoughts and emotions across wonderfully, i, for one can never achieve that as well as you do. WEll done girl, very well done.
  4. #iR@


    @ hardik... THANKS A LOT! :) its always a pleasure reading ur comments! :nw: reallyyyyyy make me rite more!

    @ disturbed... yaar mera naam tu likha ker... its not IR :( its #iR@= HIRA! hehe :eek:: THANKS man! always looking forward to ur comments..:) each and every word u said means a lot! luv wat u rite man! awesome ritter u urself r! thanks again man! :nw:
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh


    see, me no alone
    every one is all round...
    have even a coin to flic
    and let rotate all around...
    but dont u go crazy u little coin
    just stop making so loud sound....
  6. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    hm......i neednt say anything..coz i have to repeat it again..very good.....hope u have good days always....
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    hey ye main chori kiyaa...
    i heard a poet say that it's lot of ppl all around and he's over-flowing with company...but he could hear the colck tic...tic tic.....i mean it reveals taht how vaccumed was his inner self in a flash....its a good idea to exploit hai na ?
  8. #iR@


    @ madhuresh.... thx a lot man! :) yea... wat u rote was something quiet deep...(about the guy)

    @ abhi... ab kya kahoon..... THANKSSSSsss!!!!! :nw:
  9. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ^^ ttujhe khaana kya igt pe serve ho raha hainn....offie...
  10. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    :annoyed: lol, i never realized that, fine, HIRA :grin: I meant everything i said.
  11. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    good going hira...!
  12. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    simplicity excellence personified
    Ur fantabulous as always..:)
  13. #iR@


    @ nimisha & bubbly... thx gurls! ;)
  14. tanuja

    tanuja Banned

    really nice...
  15. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ^^ hmm new member..wc to the site on 1st april..

    @ de beers, how the day going now.......
  16. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    simple and cute poem.
    and who are u referring to in this poem?
    lemme know.
  17. #iR@


    @ tanuja... firstly welcome to IGT! :) and thx for the appreciation!

    @ pamposh... thx man! :rock: bus kya bataoon.... just a lot of ppl at the same time... but don't worry everythings good now! ;)
  18. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Good to kno that evrythng is good now....hope it remains same forever...
    Poem was nice as it always is .....from U :)
  19. #iR@


    @ garima... thx... like always i was looking fwd to ur comments! :)

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