Back To Where We Belong

Got lost in the loneliness of darkness
Every moment fading away from me
Seeing all but emptiness
No one left to care for me
Forlorn of all happiness

Drowning in pain
Coz of you
Bathing in tears
Coz of you
Leaving in angst
Coz of you
Coz of you
Coz of you%u2026

Last ray of hope is shattered
Love has conked out
Feeling I am kaput
Drenched in the thoughts of you
Hoping to see you someday
Back in my life

Drowning in pain
Coz of you
Bathing in tears
Coz of you
Leaving in angst
Coz of you
Coz of you
Coz of you%u2026

Hoping to see you someday
Back in my life
Back in your heart
Back to where we belong%u2026

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nice work man! but somehow i felt u could have done better.... just ma thoughts... and btw... the poem is more like lyrix... this could make an awesome song btw!

 

its actually lryics

 

^ chalo dats GREAT!

 

hey good song ...lyrics ....good stuff
keep rocking

 

nice.........

 

hey, thats the one i wrote 3 yrs back ..how did you manage to get that dude?

 

So vague and the poem doesn't flow at all.......feels a like a cliqued lyric...its need some substance.

Well just a frank opinion.......u can well do better!

 

yeah ..the poem sounds like a first hand! i used to write such immaturely funny poems ..then it had some substance later ..:grin: