Title : Baat keh na saka Baat rakhi dilmein, baat keh na saka, Jab yaad kiya dilne, to saans le na saka. Pucha kisine dil se, tera pyar kaun hai, Naam zabaan pe hote hue bhi, naam uska le na saka. Roya main khud, rulaya usko bhi bohut, Tha main itna bekaraar, ki aansu ponchh na saka. Pyaas lagi thi mujhe, baat karun kya uss se, Sagar mere paas hone par bhi, main pani pi na saka. Baaton hi baaton mein bahut kuch pucha uss se, Par pyar karti ho kya mujhse, yeh main usse puch na saka. Baat rakhi dilmein, baat keh na saka, Jab yaad kiya dilne, to saans le na saka. comments plz....
a lil change that i hv made here... poem is nice....but m just wondering....Why hv u posted this twice by mking two different threads fr the same poem..??
Thanks Garima. The changes really make a good effect. I have posted the same poem twice by mistake. While submitting, initially it showed an error. So I tried again just to find out that it has been posted twice. Can you tell me how to delete one thread....
its really a good one u must be really a lover. If u havent expressed yet then do it...dont delay ...take care buddy..hav a nice day...and keep writing...cion
