Yesyerday it rained in some parts of Dellhi...it was very soothing...wrote this poem yeaterday.... Never going to forget this one as it ruined somebody's day, who is very close to my heart....:cry1: Yeh baarish ki girti boonde Is mitti ko mehkaati boonde Ham har boond ko mehsoos kiye ja rahe hain Chup chap khade hain ye aankhein moonde Yeh dheemi dheemi chalti hawa Chalti hai saath mitti ki soundhi khushboo liye Ek doosre me simte hain is kadar Kabhi na juda hone ke liye Yeh tip tip girti baarish ki boonde Na jaane kitne saaz chhedti hai Chahe kuchh na bhi bole ham Par woh tab bhi in dhadkano ke saath ek khel khelti hai Yeh boonde, yeh hawa, yeh khushboo, yeh dhadkane Bandhti hai sama pyar karne walo ke milne ke liye Par yahan to ham akele hi jiye ja rahe hain Ek kabhi na khatm hone wale intezar me….na jaane kiske liye.
hi garima, excellent poem. i really liked it. it is quite lucid and enjoyable to read. i am from noida and here also it rained yesterday. i can imagine all this while reading your poem. reps for you. hope to see more creations like this from you. god bless you. regards, Souman
i think .. not tht good, ummok i wud say. but i love tht song in Alto ad, sung by shubha mudgal... itraati boondein .. something something.. i dun rem. oh yes but nice for delhi to hv rains but it will be horrible after this .. oh shud not be..dont take my words :
juda hoke bhi ,tu mujhme kahi baaki hai.....:think: one more... uski surat hai mere aankhon main, dil tha abhi seene main,isko churaya..jaane kisne ????:think: how u write itna bada bada poems .....in rains all i can think is chaat,long drives..........and ..ahem ahem....* coughs* and yo, nice poem as always...:beer:
@Souman....Thanks man for reading n liking it @Sachoo .... : thanks for reading : @Abhi.... btw, ye poam padne ke baad ye gaane kyu yaad aa rahein hain tum logon ko....??? :think:
well just recived a bit more fuel garima: toh main dil se keh raha hoon sahee main....this is very very good...very simple and very effective...keep writing like this!!!:beer:
Hey Garima, if U write such poems ur <<Location>> will change to "somewhere in my dreams" to "somewhere in my Heart".... Waiting for more.....
@Taxyse....he he....thats wat we call goin hand in hand thanks alot buddy.... *sees Sanjays reply* *:grin:* *not a bad idea* *Goes to 'Edit Profile'* now see the change.... he he....Thanks Sanjay....:grin: :grin:
oh no..i wasnt in town so missed it..just came back to saw the rain lashed trees and roads..anyways looks like u were observing the rain very closely..hehe..good..its always good to be close to nature...btw ur poem...very simple straight and touching nature lover's heart downright! BUT...ur poem starts so well and so positively but ends so sadly..i didnt like it ...i wanted u to keep "pyaar" way from it : but then..u've expressed ur s-o-m..to thik hai chalta hai!!
@Vini....where were u?? vacation....gud yaar..its been yrs since i hvnt gone outta delhi :'( thaks for reading this....& yeah, m very gud at turning happy thngs to sad ending....wud try not to nxt time : @Pikrohit....thanks for reading....looking frwd to see somethng full of 'emotions' from ur end...
Garima ji, Tasavvur ki to kami nahi hai par alfaazon ko thoda aansuo me piro kar dekhiye to aks kuch aur hi nazar aayega. Baharhaal, achi kavita hai. Good work, Gautam
@Amit ....Thank you for reading the poem @Gautam...A nice thot there....it wud tk yrs for me to reach upto that level...thanks for reading...
Bhaiyee arboon karbhoon buundain ek saath kush ho kar barsti hain, ja ke puchoo kitni aankhee inn boondon ko tarsti hain...tu kehta hai choti baat hai ? :think:
@Shalabh...:grin: seems that u checked ur mail : Thank you @Mr. George Bush...:worried: wat if I say 'Yes'?? @Madhuresh.....:RollLol: nice line though....wondering if u realised that it rhymed :think: