Baarish ki boonde....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Apr 24, 2006.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Yesyerday it rained in some parts of Dellhi...it was very soothing...wrote this poem yeaterday....
    Never going to forget this one as it ruined somebody's day, who is very close to my heart....:cry1:

    Yeh baarish ki girti boonde
    Is mitti ko mehkaati boonde
    Ham har boond ko mehsoos kiye ja rahe hain
    Chup chap khade hain ye aankhein moonde

    Yeh dheemi dheemi chalti hawa
    Chalti hai saath mitti ki soundhi khushboo liye
    Ek doosre me simte hain is kadar
    Kabhi na juda hone ke liye

    Yeh tip tip girti baarish ki boonde
    Na jaane kitne saaz chhedti hai
    Chahe kuchh na bhi bole ham
    Par woh tab bhi in dhadkano ke saath ek khel khelti hai

    Yeh boonde, yeh hawa, yeh khushboo, yeh dhadkane
    Bandhti hai sama pyar karne walo ke milne ke liye
    Par yahan to ham akele hi jiye ja rahe hain
    Ek kabhi na khatm hone wale intezar me….na jaane kiske liye.
     
  2. souman_das

    souman_das New Member

    hi garima,
    excellent poem.
    i really liked it.
    it is quite lucid and enjoyable to read.
    i am from noida and here also it rained yesterday.
    i can imagine all this while reading your poem.
    reps for you.

    hope to see more creations like this from you.

    god bless you.


    regards,
    Souman
     
  3. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    i think .. not tht good, ummok i wud say.

    but i love tht song in Alto ad, sung by shubha mudgal... itraati boondein .. something something.. i dun rem.

    oh yes but nice for delhi to hv rains but it will be horrible after this .. oh shud not be..dont take my words :eek::
     
  4. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    juda hoke bhi ,tu mujhme kahi baaki hai.....:think:

    one more...

    uski surat hai mere aankhon main,
    dil tha abhi seene main,isko churaya..jaane kisne ????:think:

    how u write itna bada bada poems .....in rains all i can think is chaat,long drives..........and ..ahem ahem....* coughs*

    and yo, nice poem as always...:beer:
     
  5. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Souman....Thanks man for reading n liking it :)
    @Sachoo .... :eek:: thanks for reading :eek::
    @Abhi....:):)

    btw, ye poam padne ke baad ye gaane kyu yaad aa rahein hain tum logon ko....??? :think:
     
  6. taxyse

    taxyse t3h.

    well just recived a bit more fuel garima:p:
    toh main dil se keh raha hoon sahee main....this is very very good...very simple and very effective...keep writing like this!!!:beer:
     
  7. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Hey Garima, if U write such poems ur <<Location>> will change to "somewhere in my dreams" to "somewhere in my Heart".... :)

    Waiting for more.....
     
  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Taxyse....he he....thats wat we call goin hand in hand ;) thanks alot buddy....:)

    *sees Sanjays reply*
    *:grin:*
    *not a bad idea:)*
    *Goes to 'Edit Profile'*
    now see the change....

    he he....Thanks Sanjay....:grin: :grin:
     
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  9. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    I really love that..... :) I mean ur Changing the location Idea.... lol...

    Alwayz welcome! :)
     
  10. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    oh no..i wasnt in town so missed it..just came back to saw the rain lashed trees and roads..anyways looks like u were observing the rain very closely..hehe..good..its always good to be close to nature...btw ur poem...very simple straight and touching nature lover's heart downright! BUT...ur poem starts so well and so positively but ends so sadly..i didnt like it :( ...i wanted u to keep "pyaar" way from it :p: but then..u've expressed ur s-o-m..to thik hai chalta hai!!
     
  11. pikrohit

    pikrohit New Member

    naaaaaaah
    lacks the emotion
     
  12. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Vini....where were u?? vacation....gud yaar..its been yrs since i hvnt gone outta delhi :'( thaks for reading this....& yeah, m very gud at turning happy thngs to sad ending....wud try not to nxt time :eek::

    @Pikrohit....thanks for reading....looking frwd to see somethng full of 'emotions' from ur end...:)
     
  13. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    nice one garima....
     
  14. folkpoet80

    folkpoet80 New Member

    Garima ji,
    Tasavvur ki to kami nahi hai par alfaazon ko thoda aansuo me piro kar dekhiye to aks kuch aur hi nazar aayega. Baharhaal, achi kavita hai.
    Good work,
    Gautam
     
  15. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Amit ....Thank you for reading the poem:)
    @Gautam...A nice thot there....it wud tk yrs for me to reach upto that level...thanks for reading...
     
  16. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Beautiful poem dear...
    Nice work!

    Stop worrying n write more..., good for health ;)

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  17. GeorgeBush

    GeorgeBush Banned

    do u write poems on every small details that influences you?! :D
     
  18. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Bhaiyee
    arboon karbhoon buundain ek saath kush ho kar barsti hain, ja ke puchoo kitni aankhee inn boondon ko tarsti hain...tu kehta hai choti baat hai ?
    :think:
     
  19. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Shalabh...:grin: seems that u checked ur mail :eek:: Thank you:)
    @Mr. George Bush...:worried: wat if I say 'Yes'??
    @Madhuresh.....:RollLol: nice line though....wondering if u realised that it rhymed :think:
     
  20. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Yaar Madhuresh....... mujhe tumheri comments bahut achhi lagti hai... :)
     

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