At a junction of life...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Varshita, Jan 26, 2006.

  1. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    ok .. another one from my side...

    At a junction of life
    i stretched my hand
    you held it lightly
    You became my friend

    At a junction of life
    I failed as a friend
    You caught my other hand
    My heart cried silently

    At a junction of life
    I have you as my friend
    You taught me friendship you taught me love
    It was all written in heaven above

    At a junction of life
    You are my soulmate
    Partner in good and bad times
    we have been brought together by our fate

    At a junction of life
    We are one, I feel complete
    No wishes left
    No thoughts incomplete
     
  2. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^friendship spelling wrong, i know i KNOW, i'm Dr. Webster, but just want your wonderful poem to look as perfect as it can be :grin:
     
  3. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    happy now?...lol
    I m glad someone pointed this to me... cos i wouldnt have cared to read my poem again...lol
    Next time i ll write the poem first in MSWord and then paste it here... instead of writing it in the message box itself !!
    :)
     
  4. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^I'm the the MS Word you need :grin: And yes i'm very happy now, thank you :grin:
     
  5. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    By the way... thank you !!
     
  6. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Good then.. its a deal... each time i ll post a poem.. i ll pm u... to come n check it out..lol
    That ways i will ensure atleast one viewing !!
    :RollLol:
     
  7. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^And one heartful appreciation, yes ma'am, it be a deal:grin:
     
  8. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    No reps?? ...:(
     
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  9. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    There you go, reps for a lovely poem :)
     
  10. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    are u gonna give me reps for all my poems??... then you are my new best friend!! :)
     
  11. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    *basks in glory* If i can i will!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But then i'll have to start spreading reputation, hmmm, *goes to a corner and starts formulating a plan*
     
  12. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    uh oh....is this a knight_ki_gf and disturbed thread.......
    sorry for interefering u guys..... :eek::
    hey varshita, nice poem.....but seriosly, i think u could have done better.....i read ur other poem, don't remember the name.....comparing to that, i think u can do much better .......anyway, nice job ....liked the theme in it :beer: :rock:
     
  13. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @ disturbed

    *throws a tantrum* ...*makes a sad face*...*kicks the ground* yells like a kid... "i dont care how u do it... but i want it !!"
     
  14. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    *promotes varshita to being disturbed's sister*
     
  15. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    I know.. we should put that in highlight ... bold... font size 48... and double underline !!

    pst pst... i first read your quote as ..." promotes varshita as ... disturbed sister" :RollLol:
     
  16. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thanks for your honesty !!
    Yah..... i agree... cudnt think much in it... maybe u should try n read the second one that i wrote after this... " you in my life"
     
  17. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    So many things happen at this junction of life yaar .. does this JUNCTION OF LIFE have a branch in pune ? :p: ..
     
  18. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    High Hopes :p:
    Kripya dhyan dijiye... yeh train pune nahi jaati hai !!
     
  19. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    that's the one i was talking about........i like that poem a lot...... :beer:
     
  20. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    aaah ohk .. .thank you !!
     

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