At a junction of life...

Varshita

Varshita

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ok .. another one from my side...

At a junction of life
i stretched my hand
you held it lightly
You became my friend

At a junction of life
I failed as a friend
You caught my other hand
My heart cried silently

At a junction of life
I have you as my friend
You taught me friendship you taught me love
It was all written in heaven above

At a junction of life
You are my soulmate
Partner in good and bad times
we have been brought together by our fate

At a junction of life
We are one, I feel complete
No wishes left
No thoughts incomplete
 
^friendship spelling wrong, i know i KNOW, i'm Dr. Webster, but just want your wonderful poem to look as perfect as it can be :grin:
 
happy now?...lol
I m glad someone pointed this to me... cos i wouldnt have cared to read my poem again...lol
Next time i ll write the poem first in MSWord and then paste it here... instead of writing it in the message box itself !!
:)
 
d_ist_urb_ed said:
^I'm the the MS Word you need :grin: And yes i'm very happy now, thank you :grin:
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Good then.. its a deal... each time i ll post a poem.. i ll pm u... to come n check it out..lol
That ways i will ensure atleast one viewing !!
:RollLol:
 
*basks in glory* If i can i will!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But then i'll have to start spreading reputation, hmmm, *goes to a corner and starts formulating a plan*
 
uh oh....is this a knight_ki_gf and disturbed thread.......
sorry for interefering u guys..... :o:
hey varshita, nice poem.....but seriosly, i think u could have done better.....i read ur other poem, don't remember the name.....comparing to that, i think u can do much better .......anyway, nice job ....liked the theme in it :beer: :rock:
 
@ disturbed

*throws a tantrum* ...*makes a sad face*...*kicks the ground* yells like a kid... "i dont care how u do it... but i want it !!"
 
d_ist_urb_ed said:
*promotes varshita to being disturbed's sister*
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I know.. we should put that in highlight ... bold... font size 48... and double underline !!

pst pst... i first read your quote as ..." promotes varshita as ... disturbed sister" :RollLol:
 
guitarangela said:
uh oh....is this a knight_ki_gf and disturbed thread.......
sorry for interefering u guys..... :o:
hey varshita, nice poem.....but seriosly, i think u could have done better.....i read ur other poem, don't remember the name.....comparing to that, i think u can do much better .......anyway, nice job ....liked the theme in it :beer: :rock:
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Thanks for your honesty !!
Yah..... i agree... cudnt think much in it... maybe u should try n read the second one that i wrote after this... " you in my life"
 
So many things happen at this junction of life yaar .. does this JUNCTION OF LIFE have a branch in pune ? :p: ..
 
Knight_ki_gf said:
Thanks for your honesty !!
Yah..... i agree... cudnt think much in it... maybe u should try n read the second one that i wrote after this... " you in my life"
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that's the one i was talking about........i like that poem a lot...... :beer:
 
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