~Ashes to Ashes~

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by BubblyMartini, Jan 31, 2006.

  1. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Ashes to Ashes

    The heart stringed to the lyre
    The body tied to the pyre
    Cupid resuscitated the heart to put it back to sleep
    The flames made the being from flesh to ash now a heap
    From far away came a prince on a royal colt
    And gathered the ashes in an urn
    Riding back to his noble land out in the cold
    Time immemorial brought him memories of a day
    When the being asked the prince if he would remember it
    Little knowing of the obscure meaning of the words
    The prince said “Yes I will”
    Smiling with glee it bowed down and left into the sunset.
    The prince smiled to itself and said “Yes I did”
    The ashes stirred in the urn within
    It was being happy for the prince being benign


    Hey people this piece looks more like prose than poetry
    but do gimme your comments

    and sorry for littering the forum :eek::
  2. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    good work after read this anyone will die thousand times
  3. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    yaha ek baar marna mushkil hai yaar, hazaar baar toh door ki baat:)
  4. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    ^^nice one..... sounds like some fairytale stuff ;-).............. he he never mind !! I suck at poetry .........
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    thanks Apu..
    and yh it sure is fairytale stuff;)
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  6. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    one of your first poems, which dint leave me feeling dark, and hollowed out from inside....a bitter sweet feeling.....and i think i understood this one....quite easily too:) feeling very content...mebbe due to emo generated by the poem
  7. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    ur poem reminds me of william wordsworth.....great job.
  8. taxyse

    taxyse t3h.

    wont be nit pickin....this one is lovely!!!!
    but i couldnt understand the use of 'prince' over ..say 'king'.....???
  9. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Thanks dear.. :)

    which poem are u talking about!?

    anyways thanks dude!..

    a prince is still young..
    they still have a lot of things to do before they become king..
    not all prince become kings

    thats enough i guess:)
  10. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Very well written lines bud .. I can see thru them u know ..

    Damn its strange isn't it .. sometimes these are jz words .. n sometimes if u can see thru them .. its like a life .. Same words but World of a difference ..

    Y'd he do dat ?? if he wanted to put it back to sleep ?
  11. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Thanks dear!
    words entwine a persons whole very being into themselves..
    most of the time they branch out and show life.. in it rawness

    about cupid the question could also be why was the need for it to resuscitate..?

    too many questions dude..
    its the answers people have to find..
  12. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    ^^^Da need to resuscitate might be anythin .. maybe to bring da lost person to his senses .. but Y do dat if ultimately wat he wanna do is make u sleep ??? :think:
  13. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    lets leave it at this dear
    if i say something you'd say i'm playing with "Words"
  14. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    ^^^U did dat in ur very last post :)
  15. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    i didnt know i was so good at predictions..

    funny! when i think of it in other context..:)

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