Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by notty_lad, Dec 1, 2005.
its a beautiful poem
hey .. y are u embarrassed(ur smiley ) .. .. u say it's a beautiful poem .. n ur embarrassed ?? eh .. reply is a must !
n CRYPTIC .. thanx for appreciating .. infact this is da first time u've said somethin more than "NICE" for any of muh thread ..
yeah..good poem! u've taken great care of rhyming?
good poem notty..!!
but i thought it wld be a bit notorious..
thanx vini .. (u know i always appreciate ur comments don't u n ya .. ur right .. i've taken lotta care of da rhythm .. i've got a lotta respect for poem principles .. thanx again
@ansh .. thanx dude .. yeah .. u always expect nottyness from me as muh name suggests .. but come on .. there's a sentimental side of everyone isn't it .. nJOY!
There r other rhyme schemes ya know... other than AA BB or ABAB... a different rhyme scheme wouldnt mean "disrespect for poem principles" and neither would it make a poem a prose
Well .. u bein a forum leader are writin such discouragin replies .. i feel insulted .. n ya .. i won't ever post a POEM on this site henceforth .. mark muh words .. u're still holdin personal grudges since da day i've told u dat prose thing .. so even i am not interested really in gettin muhself offended by these scornful replies of urz .. ADIOS POETRY FORUM !!
@ notty lad
dont get personal :NoNo: i'm sure she didnt say anything aimed to offend u..ez ez!
heyy notty dude.... u got offended by that!!! i'm not holding grudges, i was merely holding forth a discussion, u took it in the wrong sense dude... n i already said i loved the poem, how was i discouraging u?????? and when have i discouraged u b4 :
my heartfelt apologies if u felt offended by anythng i said (it wasnt meant to be offensive)
r u the only 1 who's allowed to "discuss" poetry??? i'm requesting u to look at this in a more mature way and not deprive others of reading ur poetry (n i believe u r a good poet) so plz relax!
U don't know anythin vini .. it was very sharply aimed .. she got personal first.. n anyway .. i don't write poems so dat people ESPECIALLY "FORUM LEADERS" could ridicule them .. atleast LEADERS should act responsibly .. read her post again !! anyway .. it doesn't matter .. there are thousands of IGTians .. Forum leader can close this thread on muh request though. . coz it was dedicated to bubbly .. n she's read it .. now rest don't matter ..
see ya around
and my being forum leader has nothing to do with it... i didnt start talkin abt the rhyme scheme referring to ur poem here but to what u said...
ridicule ur poem??? :
i DID NOT do that....
aah classic case of : If all men count with you, but none too much
never mind lad!! she didnt meant anything personal .. aah sweet trish always being helpful .. now lets see a hand shake and a brand new kicking poem from you!!
this one is a beauty by the way ...
seems like notty wont go back on his words abt never posting a poem here :
but if he does decide to post poems here, i promise to :shutup:
U won't get a chance to :shutup: .. if u get wat i mean ..
@shahrukh .. thanx !! n ya .. im sorry but i've had muh say dude .. i donno if u cal this overreactin or watever ! but .. ... ... . . .. . anyway .. thanx again
so evn u r senti-mental :think: gud to kno that
nice poem though......keep rocking ...
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