Are we Lucky???

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Feb 2, 2006.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    this mite not b a gr8 poem...but these r few thots that went across my mind...& made some paras outta it....

    They say..
    You are lucky,
    You were born without any defect
    Most of us do think the same
    That we are lucky
    We were born absolutely sane.

    They say,
    We are lucky
    Lucky to have these two eyes
    Eyes that has witnessed wars, deaths, calamities and what not....
    Better are those who can't see
    See this ugliness of the world.

    They say,
    We are lucky
    Lucky as we can listen to every sound
    Yeah, we do hear...
    Sound of terror, sound of anger, sound of cruelity and what not...
    Better are those who sleep relaxed
    As these sounds don't haunt them because they can't hear.

    They say,
    We are lucky
    Lucky as we can say whatever we want
    Yeah....we do say WHATEVER WE WANT
    Hurting everyone around us
    Better are those who can't speak
    As they dont hurt anyone...

    Thanx for reading :cool:
     
  2. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    nice work garima..

    yes indeed.. we are lucky and unlucky at the same time.. nice expression
     
  3. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Quite some thought went into this poem i see, struggling with any issues mate?
     
  4. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    there has been some deep thinking before ritting this poem... really liked the whole idea behind the poem... but i think that it could have been expressed in a better form by u garima! but again thats just wat i think... but GOOD THINKING GURL! :beer:
     
  5. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    ^^ Hmm! Not the usual Garima stuff!!!! But still good one ..................;-)
     
  6. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Hey Crazy...........

    U must be crazy enuff to write all this..................great going.....like it.
     
  7. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^What the....were you trying to compliment the work? If so, let me inform you, calling the person crazy doesnt merit appreciation.
     
  8. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    i think im an exception...coz i aint findin my brains.........nice poem but..u r lucky...
     
  9. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Thanks for replying guys...

    @Rizaaj...i kno..i keep changing my thnking in this case...when i see a pacock dancing or a rainbow or moon...i thank God for gifting me with eyes...when i tell my closed one that i love them...i thank God for gifting me with the power of speech,,,& when i hear them telling me that they Love me....I cant thank Him enuf...
    but somethng do happn sometimes...which mk u feel just opposit..
    Thanks Buddy

    @Disturbed....thanks for the concern frnd...its all resolved now :)

    @Hira....i kno..but i dint feel like changing it again...i just wrote it without thnking twice...agar mai kuchh change karti toh wo feeling nai rehti...its absolutely fresh...Thanks for boosting up my morale evrytime :)

    @Apurba...i hope u dint cry this time either :p:

    @Pamposh...thanks Lilly ;)

    @Abhi....dont bluff us by saying that u cant find ur brains...Mr.Guitar Teacher & without brain....arrey apne student ko kya sikhayega fir :p:
     
  10. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :) ummmmm....thanx for the concern buddy....actualy he knows that I love to b called crazy :eek::....i kno pretty weird & wild...but thats how I am :grin:

    Thanks again:)
     
  11. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    sounds like u inspired by "if i ever loose my faith in you"

    cause

    you will say i lost my faith in silence and progress and people on tv

    they all seem like game shows host to me..

    ..
     
  12. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    guitar dimaag se nahi ,dil se sikhata hu mai...... :p:
     
  13. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    it was a lovely poem worth to be framed and begin your day with reading it. One should always care for underpriviliged and take a lesson from them cause they actually show us the way to lead our lives. Garima im really pleased to say thie earth needs some more ppl like u.
    Open ur wings and fly high cause sky is the limit for u.
    but i must add here
    well there are many ppl who think that they are unlucky. for all those unluckyones. Life is just not a bloody party. It has more meaning to it. beforewe understand those meanings we need to think that we are lucky and we should care for all the human race esp the weak ones. Cause what we think are weak are not really weak they are the icons of power love and affection. and by loving them we actually are loving GOD
     
  14. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Sharad....finally...*phew*

    @Abhi...rehne de senti wale talle mat de.....:p:

    @Madhur.... :nw: i neva thot i wud receive such feedbk for this....Thanks alot...it means so much to me :):)
     
  15. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----


    ** sobsssss ** hehehehehe...
     

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