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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Mar 26, 2009.

  1. this is for you(all), who posts herself here and theer and then sleeps without care ..saying thats how we are..So

    words r play when, heart is pure an'
    u know the shore is tooo faarr

    weave a dream and, wear it free when
    nothing is shy of our's

    i love the way the kids feel amused, and how, their eyes get stuck on a thing bizzare
    not many who lived were loved and loved, but we knw that we are...

    So you may tell my story, of death and glory
    do tell i waived smiling from too far

    they must see the nights as beautiful wit' small lights
    and belive in thier heroes as stars..

    cause i love the way the kids,feel amused and how, their eyes get stuck on thing bizzare
    not many who lived were loved and loved but we knw that we are...
     
  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    you're too nice......such good things........especially last 2 lines......
    and one thing....why cant I write 2-liners like you?? i always try but end up like I always do......loll
    why cant I rep u again...:(
     
  3. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    @monica_decosta
    its nice one really...
     
  4. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    you r one real nice poetess
    i liked the last two lines!

     
  5. thankie........
     

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