April Girl

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by _chogyal, Mar 25, 2018.


Should I post more of my poems

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  1. _chogyal

    _chogyal New Member


    The dates of April reminds me of a girl,

    Who was let down by love;

    Love that she thought as Life,

    Which unknowingly turned into a lie.

    Even though, she was in pieces,

    She often sheltered her tears;

    Behind those pretty smiles.

    Life had let her down,

    Even before seeing someone else.

    Now, she hoped for no life;

    And drifted apart from those lies.

    You should have seen her,

    For what I say is true about how she felt.

    Making me fall deep in truth;

    For love is deeper than we think.

    The girl had wished, just for Love,

    But she didn’t realise she was still a kid.

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  2. monica_decosta

    monica_decosta Active Member

    Nice effort. Sounds like some real story...!!!

    The problem with modern lovers is they don't have time. & u cant give what u don't have. So Pizza love dosent wait, it walks fast to the tinder touch.. keep swiping really not able to understand if it was love ever. May be I'm old fashioned, may be I am old but know and have waited for the taste.

    Do post if u like the wall.
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  3. _chogyal

    _chogyal New Member

    Maybe Love is something we shall never understand as a ambitious human being.
  4. monica_decosta

    monica_decosta Active Member

    Its not about ambition, its about the environment. Everything at machine speed. Emotions take time.
  5. Super-Admin

    Super-Admin Administrator Staff Member

    Time is relative, if we were to ride on a ray of light, in this universe, everything would be standstill, not sure if there is a parallel 'verse'.
  6. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    I really liked how it starts...almost fable-like.

    And 'making me fall deep in truth' is a line that really took me somewhere. Probably because it holds a lot of significance in my life currently, coincidentally.
    I just wish you'd taken me deeper into this piece.
  7. Priusand

    Priusand Member

    It's wonderful...Love is a complex set of emotions...
  8. KixFlirty

    KixFlirty Member

    Love is full of happiness and compassion, that is the message.

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