Another shot at lyrics

Hey guys here is another lyrics by me! this is only the first four lines...hope u like them

Din Bhalley jab aye gey
Phool yaha khil jaye gey
Hogi phir rangeen fiza ye
Phanchi sur bikhrai gey

Hope u ppl like them..plz reply

 

thoda aur likhoo dost
abee ye kuch bhi nahi hai....sir pair kuch to pata chalee

 

incomplete - consider that a chorus and work on verses.

 

Kuch aur likho bandhu.