Another shot at lyrics

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Ali Akber, Jun 24, 2006.

  1. Ali Akber

    Ali Akber New Member

    Hey guys here is another lyrics by me! this is only the first four lines...hope u like them:D

    Din Bhalley jab aye gey
    Phool yaha khil jaye gey
    Hogi phir rangeen fiza ye
    Phanchi sur bikhrai gey

    Hope u ppl like them..plz reply:D
     
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    thoda aur likhoo dost
    abee ye kuch bhi nahi hai....sir pair kuch to pata chalee
     
  3. skaw

    skaw snooze

    incomplete - consider that a chorus and work on verses.
     
  4. folkpoet80

    folkpoet80 New Member

    Kuch aur likho bandhu.
     

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