Another Original of mine which was recorded few months back

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  1. mymusicmyguitar

    mymusicmyguitar New Member

  2. thehundredthone

    thehundredthone New Member

    There's nothing there.
     
  3. mymusicmyguitar

    mymusicmyguitar New Member

    When i click on the link, i am able to see it and play it as well. Why isnt it working for u ? Is there any setting in that. I wil check..
     
  4. mymusicmyguitar

    mymusicmyguitar New Member

    The track was set as Private. Now made public....U can listen to it now. Let me know if you still face problem with accessing that file..
     
  5. Sumanovo razor

    Sumanovo razor New Member

    who played the drums
     
  6. thehundredthone

    thehundredthone New Member

    Can't commend on the recording or tone since I'm guessing it's a phone recording. The song itself was simple, nothing wrong with that, but could do with slightly better structuring.
     
  7. mymusicmyguitar

    mymusicmyguitar New Member

    recordin was done on audacity and a pc mike.drums played by my friend.
    Most of the parts in this OC were just random on the spot. never actually structured it nor improvised coz there wasnt any particular chord progression that i followed. But yes there is lot of room for changes in this one ...Will try and do some better structuring in the next OCs..

    thanks for watching. Will post more videos soon.
     
  8. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    I think you should add another melody on top of this. Right now, it sounds okay but it's a little empty...in my head, I'd put your guitar line on the bass instead and it'd sound like a backing track for an Eric Johnson song on which you'd play a sweet melody.
     
  9. mymusicmyguitar

    mymusicmyguitar New Member

    Yeah sounds good....Thx....Will experiment with it soon...
     
  10. harmonizer

    harmonizer The Son of the Moon

    please add a bass line.....without bass a melody feels naked to me
     
  11. wylder

    wylder New Member

    Nice track... As suggested, work on a melody line over it.

    And ensure your guitars are in tune before recording.
     
  12. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

    I totally agree with BJR, just put a melody line on top of this and try to change some of the guitar picking with a strumming pattern. And add some basses too.
    A little suggestion from my side aswell, change the drum pattern (1:40-2:30) into the same pattern as in the beginning.
    It isn't a bad idea to have more drum patterns in one song, but the different patterns have to be fit in the track and in my opinion this isn't happening.
    Take care man!
     
  13. komal29

    komal29 New Member

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