hey ppl im back wid a new poem ... this is a pretty unusual sort of poem and an unusual topic... plz comment ! Here i sit in this empty cell thinking about the crime into which i fell We were really close to each other and we dearly loved one another But one day i shouted at him and i beat him He was stronger than expected and i couldnt defeat him I was astonished when he pulled out a blade... My love 4 him started to fade He stabbed and got me on the thigh and i was still wondering , why?! why?! why?! I cudnt take n e more of it i did not care one little bit Then i stabbed him too Didnt mean to kill him but he died Yes i killed my dearest friend but this was only 2 defend killin was not what i meant now mein herz brennt and here i sit in this empty cell thinkin abt the crime into which i fell....... PS : "mein herz brennt" is german meaning my heart burns
seeing as no one else has commented...ill share my wisdom (i dont have very much) -its an interesting topic...i think it should be continued on....why did u (in this poem) kill ur friend? what was the fight abt? I think u were in an abusive situation ...he pulls out a blade? wasnt much of a friend... thats all for now
well thnx all of u 4 ur comments.. @ cryptic & pakpride... umm well i didnt think abt the reason to the fight when i wrote this poem...just wrote it... .... well probably a good reason wud be...normal small quarrels and arguments between friendz...hota hai..ryt ?
lol....wondering why it happens to u...always :Laughing: anyways...nice poems...& thanx to Trish & PakPride who askd the question...so that i got the answer...the moment that question popped up in muh mind....LOL Keep Writing....
