********************************************************** Title: annoyed The inner self is a bit annoyed these days, cause i found some more of his weakness some really stupid things were out there, while the guy was busy showing bleakness petals of a rose, few snaps of kids and a old song on six string the guy worked reaaly hard past days, smiling at the thoughts of these things really belives evry-one who knows, the address of the desired so we walked to the kinder garden... talked business, thats how he was hired see there stands the shy idiot out side this room i call study foolish eagerness, nave sense of manners, eyes doodling ever for a buddy for this attention i was told he got a cut, on his lower lips go bold and stedy atlest for a year, for the cut take coffee sips.. "we do not deal with moral situation's here, and this isnt some kinda of cheapness" thats what i wrote on the door of study when his brown eyes told my deepness... that the inner self is a bit annoyed these days, cause i found some more of his weakness[/SIZE][/SIZE][/SIZE]
only one reply to such a nice poem..!! well liked it.. liked the unven rhyming of words.. liked the easy use of words and simplicity that came out wid easy effort..
Hey well written man u actually converse via ur poem....gud selection of words although somtimes i got lost in those lengthy sentences but...overall nice work