annoyed ;)

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Aug 16, 2007.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Title: annoyed ;)

    The inner self is a bit annoyed these days, cause i found some more of his weakness
    some really stupid things were out there, while the guy was busy showing bleakness
    petals of a rose, few snaps of kids and a old song on six string
    the guy worked reaaly hard past days, smiling at the thoughts of these things
    really belives evry-one who knows, the address of the desired
    so we walked to the kinder garden... talked business, thats how he was hired
    see there stands the shy idiot out side this room i call study
    foolish eagerness, nave sense of manners, eyes doodling ever for a buddy
    for this attention i was told he got a cut, on his lower lips
    go bold and stedy atlest for a year, for the cut take coffee sips..
    "we do not deal with moral situation's here, and this isnt some kinda of cheapness"
    thats what i wrote on the door of study when his brown eyes told my deepness...
    that the inner self is a bit annoyed these days, cause i found some more of his weakness
    ~Bish likes this.
  2. #iR@


    hmmmm... nice poem man... something different from wat u usually rite... liked it! :)
  3. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    only one reply to such a nice poem..!! well liked it.. liked the unven rhyming of words.. liked the easy use of words and simplicity that came out wid easy effort..
  4. maxeffect

    maxeffect New Member

    Hey well written man
    u actually converse via ur poem....gud selection of words
    although somtimes i got lost in those lengthy sentences but...overall nice work
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    thanks guys ;) !!

Share This Page