and the devil fell in love........

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by deepakatreya, Dec 31, 2004.

  1. deepakatreya

    deepakatreya New Member

    let me tell u a tale
    of a beautiful love that never did sail
    a tale that was as lovely yesterday as it is now
    and oh it pricks my heart ,yes it does
    and the devil fell in love....
    and so the story goes........

    in the eden,down the lane;
    of roses and velvet rain..
    sitting on the greenest prairie
    was a tender innocent fairy
    an angel as beautiful as ever can be
    but alas he didnt know,did he?
    that devils are not to love an angel.

    deep from his heart said he
    oh angel i do love thee..
    oh yes i do,
    i swear on all things eternal and true
    and on your eyes so blue
    please do trust for sure
    on my love so pure.

    its a sin to love thee
    said she.
    angel loving a devil can never be.

    he said..
    but our love goonna be a love that has never been,
    a beautiful fable,this world has ever seen........

    she said
    oh put me not in this peril......
    oh you are an evil
    they do say..
    for all ur sins (love) u should pay.

    he said,
    belive not ,what people say,
    forever with you i shall stay
    through this thorny path all the way,
    where you shall be my night and my day.

    but how can i said she......
    neither have you been to a school
    where the masters rule,
    nor do u follow a single rule

    so said he........
    oh my love whats a rule
    in love ,love is the only rule
    my love, oh angel is timeless
    and all the things timeless are lawless

    she said
    oh but my heart is forged
    and my soul baised
    what u say i do not know
    i shall follow ,thats all i know.
    to love you i cant......
    for my heart is sold
    to what the master told
    "love, an angel shouldnt
    for there is no such thing as a gold"

    and what happened to the devil who fell in love....
    no one knows
    but still the story goes
    "and the devil fell in love"
  2. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Nice poem deepak, enjoyed reading that:)
  3. itsme_amit

    itsme_amit New Member

    dear deepak.

    ur poem remind me everything abou my love...
    i wanna forget but still evrything u rite make me close to her..
    dear ur poems r amzing..
    close to my heart..
    i hope i could rite that way..
    nice poem dude...
  4. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    nice poem deepak.. me really impressed:)
  5. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Good job Deepak. Keep it up..... We need poets like U.....
  6. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Very good poem. I really liked it. Nice imagery too. Keep 'em coming.
  7. deepakatreya

    deepakatreya New Member

    hey ppl thanks a lot
    @amit nice to know it is touching atleast one person in this world in a such a profound way...........
  8. slamdunk

    slamdunk New Member

    nice one deepak ,. enjoyed it .. but u weren't a devil...
  9. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Yeah, I also don't think that Deepak is the devil...... (might be he is) Hahahaha...

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