And So It Is..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by i'm_not_neo, Nov 21, 2008.

  1. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Ok I know this is lame but i just am too hyper to post a poem i've written after a loooong time..

    I dream I'm with you,
    On a familiar street,
    Smiling as we pass that coffee-shop
    Where we decided to meet..

    I dream sitting on a lonely beach,
    Where it's just you and me,
    And where my dreams to chase the horizon,
    Never seem silly..

    I wake up to reality,
    Where we both messed up,
    Where there's no us,
    A dead relationship never does get up..

    I'm beginning to forget your face,
    But like a drop of blue in a glass of water,
    No matter what you do,
    The tint stays..

    All I wanted was to see you again,
    Knowing i couldn't change a lot,
    But hoping...
    The demons get slain..

    We did get to meet again,
    And all I can say,
    Is that it was just perfect,
    And though I knew at the end we'd part,
    I can now hope,our paths may intersect..

    At least now I have a better memory to carry with me,
    On the journey to my after-life should I take off,
    And I'll still have you in my dreams every night till then,
    Hoping that the alarm never goes off..
     
  2. monica_decosta

    monica_decosta Active Member

    bhuut accha... mast ... bom ...likha hai keep posting
     
  3. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Haha..bom?Thank you :)
     
  4. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    A little sappy in my opinion but that's not a bad thing. I could totally imagine this to be a Jack Johnson song.
     
  5. acoustic12

    acoustic12 New Member

    brilliant lyrics.. especially the fourth verse..fantastic... can i have ur name.?
     
  6. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    its fantastic man, keep postin' stuff like this!
     

Share This Page