And So It Is..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by i'm_not_neo, Nov 21, 2008.

  1. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Ok I know this is lame but i just am too hyper to post a poem i've written after a loooong time..

    I dream I'm with you,
    On a familiar street,
    Smiling as we pass that coffee-shop
    Where we decided to meet..

    I dream sitting on a lonely beach,
    Where it's just you and me,
    And where my dreams to chase the horizon,
    Never seem silly..

    I wake up to reality,
    Where we both messed up,
    Where there's no us,
    A dead relationship never does get up..

    I'm beginning to forget your face,
    But like a drop of blue in a glass of water,
    No matter what you do,
    The tint stays..

    All I wanted was to see you again,
    Knowing i couldn't change a lot,
    But hoping...
    The demons get slain..

    We did get to meet again,
    And all I can say,
    Is that it was just perfect,
    And though I knew at the end we'd part,
    I can now hope,our paths may intersect..

    At least now I have a better memory to carry with me,
    On the journey to my after-life should I take off,
    And I'll still have you in my dreams every night till then,
    Hoping that the alarm never goes off..
     
  2. bhuut accha... mast ... bom ...likha hai keep posting
     
  3. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Haha..bom?Thank you :)
     
  4. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    A little sappy in my opinion but that's not a bad thing. I could totally imagine this to be a Jack Johnson song.
     
  5. acoustic12

    acoustic12 New Member

    brilliant lyrics.. especially the fourth verse..fantastic... can i have ur name.?
     
  6. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    its fantastic man, keep postin' stuff like this!
     

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