And she weeps again

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by CrYpTiC_angel, Feb 12, 2006.

  1. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    She thought it was over
    That her pain was gone
    She sang, she laughed
    She sewed back what was torn

    She dreamt beautiful dreams
    But now, again, she weeps

    She jokes and laughs
    Her laughter lingers for a while
    She lives life to the fullest
    She dances, she smiles

    She paints it all in reds, blues and greens
    But now, again, she weeps

    She found what she wished for
    And is happy as can be
    And she does not understand
    She asks, "Why again, why me?"

    Even when she's happy, she'll be sad, it seems
    And so, again, she weeps

    (I wish to add more but have to study... but I almost never get back to my poems *sigh*

    and I dont like this one a wee bit :'( but wanted to start writing again, so I'm glad I wrote smthng)
    nimisha and shsnawada like this.
  2. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    A very beautiful composition..........gud to see u back Cryptic.
  3. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    wonderful thoughts expressed my dear which can be felt too with your amazing way of writing:rock: would like to read more of it but after your studes;)
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    thanks a lot :)


    thanks! I'll try to add something to it when I wanna take a break from trying to study :grin:
  5. #iR@


    u rock gurl! always amazed by what u rite! :beer:
  6. sixstringsin

    sixstringsin ||||||

    nice peice of writing ! .. but imo left me craving for some more lines towards the end .. or maybe i didnt quite get it :p:
  7. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    ^ thats nice CA .... wish I cud write like u '-(
  8. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    simple yet powerful..good goin CA..
  9. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<---- more outta the closet......must have been months now u had put the last one....this one as more added to my file........

    She sewed back what was torn

    ...the best line for me in the poem.....keep writin.....gr8 work...

    :::::::::::::::::: ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS:::: But ENGG. never study :::::::::::::::::
  10. idefixe

    idefixe New Member

    Mecloncholy at its best all that i can say
    Buts it needs some more lines.........Guess th agirl is
    grt writing.....keep it up
    ANd best of luc for exams...............

    Bye for now................
  11. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    I actually felt the same.. aah, well, later hopefully, i shall add more..


    thanks :)
  12. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    glad you started writing dear
    but this time of the year i was expecting something else;)

    i liked this poem..:)
    reminds me of this girl i know...
  13. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Sshhhhh now... ;)

    And thanks :)
  14. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    Reminds me of "little girl" :shock:

    Nice poem though. (meh, i cant really stay away from default comments)
  15. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    yeah? :think: wasnt supposed to be like that though......

    hmm... well, I sometimes feel MOST of my poems are the same, so.. heh
  16. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta


    10 chars

  17. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Good Poem.

    Hate you for it though.
  18. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

  19. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    oh trish!!!
    i was expecting something else from u too;) ;)
    anyway..good to see u back...and u better go and study....:beer: :beer:
    really good poem infact....i liked it..:dance:
  20. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    thanks sistah!

    :cool: :rock:


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