And she weeps again

She thought it was over
That her pain was gone
She sang, she laughed
She sewed back what was torn

She dreamt beautiful dreams
But now, again, she weeps


She jokes and laughs
Her laughter lingers for a while
She lives life to the fullest
She dances, she smiles

She paints it all in reds, blues and greens
But now, again, she weeps


She found what she wished for
And is happy as can be
And she does not understand
She asks, "Why again, why me?"

Even when she's happy, she'll be sad, it seems
And so, again, she weeps

(I wish to add more but have to study... but I almost never get back to my poems *sigh*

and I dont like this one a wee bit :'( but wanted to start writing again, so I'm glad I wrote smthng)

 

Beautiful

A very beautiful composition..........gud to see u back Cryptic.

 

wonderful thoughts expressed my dear which can be felt too with your amazing way of writing:rock: would like to read more of it but after your studes

 

@walk_alone

thanks a lot

@sweetie

thanks! I'll try to add something to it when I wanna take a break from trying to study :grin:

 

u rock gurl! always amazed by what u rite! :beer:

 

nice peice of writing ! .. but imo ..it left me craving for some more lines towards the end .. or maybe i didnt quite get it :

 

^ thats nice CA .... wish I cud write like u '-(

 

simple yet powerful..good goin CA..

 

hmm....one more outta the closet......must have been months now u had put the last one....this one as usual......lovely...one more added to my file........

She sewed back what was torn

...the best line for me in the poem.....keep writin.....gr8 work...



:::::::::::::::::: ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS:::: But ENGG. never study :::::::::::::::::

 

Mecloncholy at its best ..............is all that i can say
Buts it needs some more lines.........Guess th agirl is u..........lol
grt writing.....keep it up
ANd best of luc for exams...............

Bye for now................

 

I actually felt the same.. aah, well, later hopefully, i shall add more..

@every1

thanks

 

glad you started writing dear
but this time of the year i was expecting something else

i liked this poem..
reminds me of this girl i know...

 

Sshhhhh now...

And thanks

 

Reminds me of "little girl" :shock:

Nice poem though. (meh, i cant really stay away from default comments)

 

yeah? :think: wasnt supposed to be like that though......

hmm... well, I sometimes feel MOST of my poems are the same, so.. heh

 

NO

10 chars

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Good Poem.

Hate you for it though.

 

Thanks....

 

oh trish!!!
i was expecting something else from u too
anyway..good to see u back...and u better go and study....:beer: :beer:
really good poem infact....i liked it..:dance:

 

thanks sistah!

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