An attempt at being less "personal" LOL

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Hell'n Wheels, Jul 6, 2006.

  1. Hell'n Wheels

    Hell'n Wheels New Member


    Her face is of another world,
    the lady of the night,
    her beauty framed by Heaven's glow
    of alabaster light.

    So shyly as she passes by,
    behind a veil she slips.
    Eternity won't make a face
    her beauty can't eclipse.

    She smiles at her companion as
    she slowly turns away,
    as if she were a lover lost
    with nothing more to say.

    She peers into the depths of space
    in darkness unafraid,
    then turns to face the world again,
    her monthly penance paid.

    Comments anyone? Hell'n
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  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Beautiful lines..
    Nice channelling of thoughts...
    Keep writing n posting :)

  3. Hell'n Wheels

    Hell'n Wheels New Member

    Zoom, Thank you, Hell'n

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