An Acoustic instrumental song

Discussion in 'IGT Soundtrack - Your Band, Your Gig, Your Music' started by vstanv, Feb 22, 2009.

  1. vstanv

    vstanv New Member

    Hi guys,

    I recorded this song "Yearning" yesterday.
    Do listen in... and tell me what u think...(suggestions /criticism / any feedback)

    http://www.soundclick.com/vishwanath

    thanks :)
    hope u'd like it :)
     
  2. parry

    parry Sing ing Sing

    surely its a nice tune.....i think u shud leave some difference between the main verse and teh chorus of this tune....ultimately i think it overlaps somewhere in the melody....its only my view....but its done good......the only thing require is to add some lyrics and the stuff.
    keep the work coming
     
  3. vstanv

    vstanv New Member

    hey thanks for listening... the chorus part- yea they say its good to have a chorus that's kinda "seperate yet going along" with the verse... shud try something that way.. (havnt got much idea tho' )
     
  4. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

    Don't know what to say about this, i can't say its an instrumental, in my opinion these are some notes played in a certain order.
    It sounds nice and maybe you could make it sounding better by adding some more in this song, a solo or maybe some other instruments!
    Take care man and keep posting!
     

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