' Amanush Mera Naam Nahin Hai...! '

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., May 1, 2006.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Aaj kal likhne ke siwaa kuch kaam nahin hai
    Iss liye kalam ko zaraa sa aaraam nahin hai

    Mere dard bhare shayri se bhara mera diary
    Rehne do, tum par koyi bhi ilzaam nahin hai

    Bhoule se bhi jo toumko yaad na kiya meine
    Aissa koyi din, raat,subhah, shaam nahin hai

    Daak peti ko ek hazaar ek baar khola din ko
    Mayoos to houe jab tera paighaam nahin hai

    Nam hein ye chaksh to tumhara kya jaata hai
    Zaahir hai mere ashk ka koyi daam nahin hai

    Moujhe Jaan kaho,Jaanu kaho, acha lagta hai
    Weisse bhi, "Amanush” mera naam nahin hai


    Amanush...

    :)
     
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    "Mere" dard bhare shayri se bhara mera diary
    Rehne do, tum par koyi bhi ilzaam nahin hai

    ye correct kat lo yaar Meri
    Baki vah vah reps added and
    Dost tu shayar kamaal ka hai, jo bhi tera naam hai
     
  3. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    hmm..sorry to say it but it didnt touch me much as ur other poems do...but nonetheless it was surely a good attempt.
     
  4. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    @ Madhu...! Aisse hi galtiyan bataate rehna...! Aap se hum khoush hein, Madhu...!

    Isse pasand karne ke liye shukriya...

    :)

    @ Vini...! Well, I will try to do my best next time, ' Sautan Ki Saheli ' is in workshop...! ;)

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    if this was from newbie.. i wud have praised..

    but after knowing ur earlier work.. this one is just OK-OK or SO-SO..
     

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