Alone

i live with the shadows
of my thoughts
with my own skin
i draw another one
nobody cares to see
if my shadows remain
i put up a pretence
disguise the pain
theres a crowd
nobody knows nobody
when i sit back and think
only me and my shadows remain

 

good one.but its really took me time to get through it!

 

thnx devil...

i know it takes a bit of time to percolate in mind but then again somethings are for some people...

 

very nice...

 

u rock :rock:

 

thnx guys ..i was wondering wat do u guys think of one of my earlier ones titled..battlefield


putting it down again here

a sorrow
no tomorrow
flailing arms
failing charms
a hope here
some shattered there
dreams no more
blood and gore
dying light
defeated might
the blood so red
the stars so bright

 

u roxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx :rock:

 

ohhhhh cooooooool!that was so meaning ful and rhyming!wow that is gr8 dude!keep up the good wrk!

 

wow!!!

in fact u sound a bit like Pearl Jam's "Black" ...

 

@slayer - pearl jams do the evolution video rocks all time animation!

 

^ amen...........

 

not seen it ...

 

thnx guys...i'll try to put up something more...put up more than a mere pretence

 

dude...post ur nu stuff in nu therads...coz most of the times if u bump da same thread it goes un-noticed....