all these yrs of my life...passed away in the sweetest manner, jus' bcoz of my poems!

Hey frnds....i wud lyk to share something wid u ppl
i'm a student of 10th std....but i started writing poems in 8th
n till now i hv written over 50 poems
i wud lyk to share the first poem of 10th written by me!!

title - SO NUMB!

I stand in the rain n i like it, i guess i told u
come walk in my shoes n u'll never feel the pain
bcoz dear, pain is never felt when u r NUMB

I've never felt anything this good enough
oh my defenders, u'll never feel it
bcoz dear, carrying on wid this is so tough
n i just wanna hold on

Now i kno i'll be able to do
what i always wanted to
coz now, i'm not feeling anything
oh look at me, i've become SO NUMB!!

well this poem is free verse
as u can see, there is no rhyming scheme as such!!
n this poem ain't too good also...i dun like it
i'll post 'my first poem' next time
till then..
tc bbye

 

young man, to me it was a good poem

keep posting

 

thnx madhuresh!!

actually writing poems is not my hobby..

i write poems when i'm extremely frustrated n disgusted...bcoz when u r happy then u cn share ur happiness wid others but when u r sad then u can't share ur problem wid every1....n if u write a diary entry then every1 comes 2 kno about ur problem......but i write poems so that no one can cum to kno why i'm unhappy....

i love being mysterious!!!!!!!!!! lol

 

same here ...!

wehnver i dont get waht to do with this feeling..i write it !

poetry is a like a wrapper, to the real thing. A wrapper which absorbs the things u wanted to say and looks curvatious, dry wet or used sometmes


u can love anything u like kid

lol

 

lol...i love almost everything happening around me.....bcoz a dark cloud has a silver lining!!
well...one more poem!! cHeCk iT oUt....

MISSING
When the moonlight crawls across the street
chasing away the summer heat
something happens and the light turns down low
i open the door, trying to hear the cold breeze blow
you have no pain, no stress
and i linger in the darkness
no one wud cry for my absence, i know
u all forgot me long ago
like everyone else, my frnd u also turn back n sing
but, wait.......ISN'T SOMEONE MISSING?????

i feel, this poem is a bit incomplete!
do give ur replies n suggestions!!
tc bbye
god bless!!

 

Nicely written....no rhymes, who cares till plots are good....

for 2nd thing......
this summer doesnt cut the sufferings
and i've still have long to go
but u've been missing too, my friend,
i should've seen that long ago/......\\


Edit: ///ahh......i've gone bad.......//\
;(

 

^^ all together u were great hats

keep rocking
Im lsitning

 

:') thank you vry much!!
just wanted to share something with u ppl...

i met with an accident yesterday n the muscle of my thumb has torn badly so now i hv a metal plaster on
actually i was driving activa n suddenly someone came in front of me n in order to save that person from getting injured i applied breaks and ghabrahat mein the speed also increased so my activa slipped n i got hurt
even my foot n leg is also bruised

but i hope to recover n as i hv vry hectic schedule from july so i dont think i'll be able to post more poems...i hv exams frm 3rd july

well...take vry good care of urself n god bless
bbyeeeeeeeeee

 

well, but for exams, we wuld'nt mind if u typed ur poems wid ur other hand


tc
recover soon.......n best luck!

 

i meant....that i wont get enough time to come online and post my poems here!!

lol well thnx for the wishes!!
u also take care
byee ^_^

 

well...one last poem...

i never thought about the title for this poem...

GOODBYE MY ANGEL
YOU HAVE BEEN SO GOOD TO ME
BUT YOU KNOW I AM UNABLE,
TO KEEP U WITH ME
I CLOSE MY EYES AND THINK ABOUT YOU
BUT DAMN, THESE TEARS DON'T LEAVE ME
AND THOUGH, I GOT TO LET U GO
U WILL ALWAYS BE A SPECIAL PERSON FOR ME!!!!!!!!!!

short...but i like it!!
okayy now...live ur life and enjoy!!
i'll miss u all
take care
see ya
bbye....rock on \m/

 

hmmmm/.......cya