'Alfaaz...!'

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Jul 31, 2005.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Jo qaawi mantra na ban sake eisse koyi alfaaz nahin
    Jo pyaar ke geet na gaa sake eissi koyi awaaz nahin

    Mazhabi kitaab main jo talaasha wo ishk main hi mila
    Hum ne jaana ki pyar se badhkar koyi namaaz nahin

    Hamsafar ban ke jo saath de aur bevajeh ajnabi bane
    Eisse insaan par ye khudrat bhi kabhi karta naaz nahin

    Kitni niyaaz hai ki mein tere liye sher o ghazal likhoun
    Par mein sirf premi houn Ghalib ya koyi Faraaz nahin

    'Mushkil' hai toumhare zulm o sitam se anjaan ban.na
    Chahte houe bhi tum par mein ho sakta naraaz nahin


    Qaawi mantra : Powerful mantra
    Alfaaz : words (plural of lafz)
    Mazhabi kitaab : Religious scriptures
    Namaaz : Prayer
    Bevajeh :Without any reason
    Niyaaz : Desire
    Faraaz Ji : A great ghazal writer


    Thanks

    Amanush...

    :)

    I've edited it to explain some words(specially for Screwdriver)
     
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  2. somendra_guitar

    somendra_guitar New Member

    Amanush...or i should say....Mushkil ji
    u r gr8
    really

    reps for u once again!!!
     
  3. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    hey amanush....dint quite get this one...
     
  4. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks, Somendra!

    Naam main hamare pata nahin kya kya rakha hai
    Kissi ne Amanush to koyi aur ne Mushkil rakha hai...


    Apna khayaal rakhna...thik hai?

    :)
     
  5. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    I have edited the poem and written down the meaning of
    some words...Hope that it is easier now...!

    Keep coming and take care...ok ?

    :)
     
  6. somendra_guitar

    somendra_guitar New Member

    zaroor khyal rakhoonga!!
    aap bhi apna khyal rakhna.......
     
  7. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    kya baat hai....wah wah subahnalla.....sm pts...
     
  8. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    wow...amanush...really great...n thanx for givin the meanins...u write great man....
     
  9. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    hey one from me also...


    Arz kiya hai..



    Chand ko tod tunga...... :hitme:

    Suraj ko phod dunga...

    Tu ek baar haas to de.....

    Tere sare daant tod dunga... :banana:



    dedicated to some one special above me ;)



    keep fighting


    vishwa :cool:
     
  10. somendra_guitar

    somendra_guitar New Member

    wah janab...

    aapki shayari toh lajawab hai...

    but
    :war:
     
  11. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    wow...thanx for the dedication vishwa....dun worry we shall keep fightin... :beer:
    this is a dedication from me to u...
    bahut door rehkar bhi pas lagte ho... :goof:
    nazro se dur rahkar bhi khas lagte ho... :goof:
    har baar dusro ki shayari type karte ho... :hitme: :slap:
    aur khudko bade smart samajhte ho... :boxed:
     
  12. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    hehe.... :rule: :rule:
     
  13. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    hmmmmmm...

    not a bad sher !!! screwdriver... !!


    Ya I know i am in bangalore and u r in pune but sill i am " KHAS " for u...

    thats a compliment... well i have also one sher for u...


    Chand pe kali ghata chati to hogi, :think:

    Sitaron ko muskurahat aati to hogi, :think:

    Tum lakh chupao dunia se, :p:

    Magar akele mein tumhe apne aap pe hasi aati toh hogi! :RollLol:



    PANGA AUR MUJHSE..... !!!!!!!!!


    vishwa :cool: the koolest dude
     
  14. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    hey vishwa this is for u...

    SHARAB bani to :think:
    MEHKHANE bane, :goof:
    HUSAN bana to :think:
    DEEWANE bane, :goof:
    kuchh to hai AAP me, :think: :think:
    u hi to nahi PAAGALKHANE bane... :insane: :insane: :insane:
     
  15. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..............

    screwdriver this is straight from heaven to u..............


    Jis waqt khuda ne tumhe banaya hoga, :nw:

    ek saroor sa uske dil pe chaya hoga... :nw:

    pehle socha hoga tujhe jannat mein rakh lun.. :nw:


    phir usse zoo ka khayal aaya hoga.................... :RollLol:



    vishwa :cool: no need to tell anything....
     
  16. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    HAHAHAAA ...

    that was gr8 ...

    so we have a tie between "The Machines" and the "deadly duo" - "Vishwa and Screwdriver" ... for SPAMs ...

    hehehehohoho ...
     
  17. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    neway taht reminds me ... check this one out ...


    ek sher arz hai aapki khidmat mein ...

    ek sher arz hai aapki khidmat mein ...


    (aadab ... irshaad ... yeah .. cheers ... booos ... etc) ...

    ek sher arz hai aapki khidmat mein ...

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    just check out my avatar ...



    LOL .... ROTFL ...
    (OK that was a pretty lame one ...)

    still ROTFL ...
     
  18. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    ark kiya hai

    Vo bhi kya din the
    **wah wah wah**
    Vo bhi kya din the
    **wah wah wah**

    Vo bhi kya din the jab ladkiyan hamain diwani hokar kiss kiya karti thi
    **wah wah wah**

    Vo bhi kya din the jab ladkiyan hamain diwani hokar kiss kiya karti thi

    Vo bhi kya din the jab ladkiyan hamain diwani hokar kiss kiya karti thi
    **wah wah wah**






    Par hai re hamari phuti kismat

    Vo bhi kya din the jab ladkiyan hamain diwani hokar kiss kiya karti thi

    Par hai re hamari phuti kismat




    kii uss waqt hum 2 saal ke hua karte the :eek::
     
  19. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks to all for appreciating and also for the kind comments...!

    Keep coming and take care

    Amanush...

    :)
     

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