akelapan..titled poetry

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Oct 19, 2005.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    hi..
    posting the poetry...akelapan....



    Darpan mein khud ko dekh kar kaha,
    khushi sahi itni ki dard jaa chupa,
    Hum to aise na the,aye dil,
    kisse kahen humne kya kuch nahi saha.

    Beeti baatein roz shaam yaad aati
    aur kya bus aanken nam ho jaati
    Fursat ke pal bhi ab chain nahi,
    bhujta diya ,mein us diye ki baati

    Umra guzari intezaar mein,
    kyun chaman uzre bahar mein,
    Hamse kya khata ho gayi jo,
    saath chod chale is sansar mein.



    expecting the reply...


    rohit
     
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  2. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    no one to comment............no one liked it?..i think..

    rohit
     
  3. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    I liked the bits which i understood.... nice job ..
     
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    nice attempt! :)
     
  5. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    nice one ;)
     
  6. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    bohot khub likha hai aapne rohit ;)

    Paa kar Rohit aapki dosti ka saath,aaj bhi aap saathi he hai
    Hai wada dosti ka, aur nibhana he hai,
    Khushiyoon ke din guzarte hai khoob saath
    Dukh uthanay ke liye dost tadap rahi hai
    Qasmay waday tu thay humare,
    sath jeene marne ke Dil se he pucho,
    aaj bhi mei saath hoon na?
     

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