I have written this one aftr a long time....keeping in mind that no1 cries aftr reading this....hope to succeed...lemme kno if I did :grin: Aj bhi dil me ek yaad rava hai Tune jo kahi thi wo har baat rava hai Chah kar bhi bhoolta nahi tera saath Teri baahoan me jo beetee thi wo sham java hai Teri saanso ki garmi aj bhi mere zehen me rava hai Tere sparsh ki wo gudgudi aj bhi mere badan me rava hai Chah kar bhi bhoolta nahi wo sharmana tera Tere labo ne diye the jo jaam, wo aj bhi mere labo par java hai Tere har wade ne dikhaya tha jo sapna, Wo aj bhi in aankhoan me rava hai Tujhe dekh ke ruki thi meri jo saanse Wo aj bhi waha ki waha hai Har cheez vaisi hi hai jaisi tu chhod ke gaya tha Kami hai to bas teri Aankhein doondti hain tujhe har ek soorat me Par pata nahi aj tu kahan hai… Wo shaam hi kuchh or thi Tere sang guzare un palo ki baat hi kuchh or thi Jaisa ki maine pehle bhi kaha hai Tere saath ki madhoshi aj bhi mere dil me java hai…. Rava...not sooji: here its used as 'Fresh'.
Kya khaane mein aaj bhi bana rava hain. : ..sorry..hehehe but java :shock: or did u mean javan. Aj shud be Aaj. nice poem indeed n reminded me of "mera kuch saamaan tumhare paas rava hain ..oops .. rakaha hain ..pada hain..something".. keep writing sachin
^^^Life is an exaggeration... it might not b special....but it depends on u how u want to remember it...i chose to smile...
I agree ...Java was used so that it can go with rava...& Aaj as Aj...ummm m too lazy to add an 'A' ther : Thanks for that comparisn :nw:
yeah.. ur right otherwise if u hv to go with javan, it wud hv been ravan (this is actually correct but then it wud hv reminded of ramayan :think: ). java >> programmer's language :dance: .
Is "rava" = "rawan" and "java" = "jawan" I really cudnt understand these words. Well, overall, it's nice.
A poem after a long time. Gud one but wdnt say a great one. Usage of few words seems to be forced prabably to make few para rhymed.
wooop...here u go... i thnk this how u spell it in English...i mean whn u 'try' to write Urdu in English:grin: i got confused with 'ravan' with as Sachoo said reminded me of Ramayan.... Java....shud b javan i thnk...cos 'Jawan' wud seem Army ka "Jawan" : Thanx
thats the way it iss........this one was good poem..though i felt like eating rava by the time i finished it..nah..but i loved the poem..and now u ve confused me as to if i should get the tissue papers or no for ur further poems...good one....saaru che.....:
nicee poemm... but not great as per garima's standard.. cant help saying this.... but what wud poem mean if rava=suji.. i shud shut up now.. lol...hope disturbed wont say im spamming again...
well, java really confused me at first. I thot dat what's the computer langeage Java doin out here in Garima's poems. lol....