Agony

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Radius_Vector, May 22, 2005.

  1. Radius_Vector

    Radius_Vector New Member

    I dont know what Im doing
    I dont know what to find
    I dont know how Im alive
    in my current state of mind.

    People stare, People mock
    Wise men prescribe, Strong men command
    I just keep doing what Im doing,
    but I dont know what Im doing.

    I need help
    For I find
    a demon inside me , help me,
    Help me please.

    Now the demon is eating me
    My face, my arms, my legs,
    I just keep doing what Im doing,
    but I dont know what Im doing.

    Im living in this hell inside me
    Hell youve never seen before,
    I dont know how Im alive
    in my current state of mind.

    I cannot live in this hell anymore
    For this demon
    has eaten my purpose of life
    I cannot take this anymore
    I cannot.....I cannot.........


    I dont know how Im alive
    in my current state of mind.
    God, take me home
    where the angels fly,
    take me out of my world.
     
  2. Bristy

    Bristy ...

    Nice poem...
    here a lit one for u......

    Don,t remember where I was
    I realized life was a game
    The more seriously I took things
    The harder the rules became
    I had no idea what it,d cost
    My life passed before my eyes
    I found out how little I accomplished
    All my plans denied...
    There are the last words I,ll ever speak
    And thet,ll
    set me free...
     
  3. Radius_Vector

    Radius_Vector New Member

    Thanks m8 first reply!

    Anyways nice addition, will see where it fits well.
    My friends modified the lyrics a bit and made a song out of it.
    Its basically about this guy in trouble with his own mind.
     
  4. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    awesome ones...keep em comin...
     
  5. Radius_Vector

    Radius_Vector New Member

    Thanks cyph

    I felt like that after my board exams, LOL but i ended up doing gr8 :)
    I guess the demon's gone :) lets see if I cant find a different theme.
     

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