Once have I departed, make me your dream I would never comback that I really mean Take me in ur every breath hold me in ur sighs I wd never lukbak though my heart cries every time i meet u its a stranger i meet everyt eime i greet u its a stranger i greet u are like a star shining somewhere iam a fading comet cant reach you there I will never forget u nor will i try go-go my dear just leave me though my heart cries. (for the only one I ever loved)
Dear Walk_alone Ji...! I really appreciate the way you expressed your feelings in this poem...! Hope that you will like this one... What I really have is silence, and my silence is pregnant with many kinds of meaning. freed by your absence finally my heart is empty and I take my time to observe and lick these fresh scars of mine...! Amanush...
luv always ends leavin a suprise package.....which is kinda full of pain agony tears n worst of all makin u remember ev lil time u spent with tht person jus kips flashin around nice poem cheer up lyf m8 shit happens
this poem is amazing....really conveys the emotion well... I like this part: "I will never forget you...nor will I try...go-go my dear just leave me ...though my heart cries." its a really touchy situation...she is leaving yu physically...but your love is everlasting...its too sweet...I love the poem...teary situation though...(jeez! tryin to make peeple cry?!)
reeeeelly nice....cos i can very well relate to it...but kno wat buddy...i hv heard it from so many ppl now & i hv started believing that...thot of sharing it here... Failure in Love teaches u ALOT.....tk it as a lesson & move on
My first post This is my first post in IGT .. though there are many errors ( I learnt later ). I thought I would share it with you all.
The difference is, in first para "charecter" decides to abandon the pursuit for his love in dispair, however in last para he doesn't want to lose out the memories even though his "love" is ready to abandon him nomatter.