Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by walk_alone, Jan 7, 2006.

  1. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Once have I departed,
    make me your dream
    I would never comback
    that I really mean

    Take me in ur every breath
    hold me in ur sighs
    I wd never lukbak
    though my heart cries

    every time i meet u
    its a stranger i meet
    everyt eime i greet u
    its a stranger i greet

    u are like a star
    shining somewhere
    iam a fading comet
    cant reach you there

    I will never forget u
    nor will i try
    go-go my dear just leave me
    though my heart cries.

    (for the only one I ever loved)
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  2. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Dear Walk_alone Ji...!

    I really appreciate the way you expressed your feelings in this poem...!

    Hope that you will like this one...

    What I really have is silence,
    and my silence is pregnant
    with many kinds of meaning.

    freed by your absence
    finally my heart is empty
    and I take my time
    to observe and lick
    these fresh scars of mine...!


  3. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    great stuff dude.
  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    the poem is nice....
    and if its for some1 u ever loved... i can imagine the pain...gr8!
  5. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e <3V/S<3 50 CeNt$

    luv always ends leavin a suprise package.....which is kinda full of pain agony tears n worst of all makin u remember ev lil time u spent with tht person jus kips flashin around

    nice poem

    cheer up;) lyf m8 shit happens :)
  6. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    this poem is amazing....really conveys the emotion well...

    I like this part:
    "I will never forget you...nor will I try...go-go my dear just leave me ...though my heart cries."

    its a really touchy situation...she is leaving yu physically...but your love is everlasting...its too sweet...I love the poem...teary situation though...(jeez! tryin to make peeple cry?!) ;)
  7. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Thank u all..............

    Thank u all .....thts all i can say
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  8. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    u conveyed ur emotions beautifully :)

    lookin fwd to see more of ur poems!
  9. #iR@


    this poem is beautiful... very simple yet very impactful :beer:
  10. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    very nice..........emotional too :cry1: reps for ya.....
  11. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    reeeeelly nice....cos i can very well relate to it...but kno wat buddy...i hv heard it from so many ppl now & i hv started believing that...thot of sharing it here...
    Failure in Love teaches u it as a lesson & move on:):)
  12. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e &lt;3V/S&lt;3 50 CeNt$

    take d lesson n luv on :cool:
  13. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    life's all about the choice u make^^^^All the best.
  14. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    My first post

    This is my first post in IGT .. though there are many errors ( I learnt later ). I thought I would share it with you all.
  15. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    looks good for a 1st post!....but are'nt the 1st n last para contradicting each other?
  16. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    The difference is, in first para "charecter" decides to abandon the pursuit for his love in dispair, however in last para he doesn't want to lose out the memories even though his "love" is ready to abandon him nomatter.
  17. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ....i was thinking the same... till i read this....
    well its good for a 1st post...

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