Agony

[walk_alone]

Once have I departed,
make me your dream
I would never comback
that I really mean

Take me in ur every breath
hold me in ur sighs
I wd never lukbak
though my heart cries

every time i meet u
its a stranger i meet
everyt eime i greet u
its a stranger i greet

u are like a star
shining somewhere
iam a fading comet
cant reach you there

I will never forget u
nor will i try
go-go my dear just leave me
though my heart cries.

(for the only one I ever loved)

 

[Amanush...]

Once have I departed,
make me your dream
I would never comback
that I really mean

Take me in ur every breath
hold me in ur sighs
I wd never lukbak
though my heart cries

every time i meet u
its a stranger i meet
everyt eime i greet u
its a stranger i greet

u are like a star
shining somewhere
iam a fading comet
cant reach you there

I will never forget u
nor will i try
go-go my dear just leave me
though my heart cries.

(for the only one I ever loved)

Dear Walk_alone Ji...!

I really appreciate the way you expressed your feelings in this poem...!

Hope that you will like this one...

What I really have is silence,
and my silence is pregnant
with many kinds of meaning.

freed by your absence
finally my heart is empty
and I take my time
to observe and lick
these fresh scars of mine...!

Amanush...

 

[walk_alone]

Bravo....

great stuff dude.

 

[nimisha]

the poem is nice....
and if its for some1 u ever loved... i can imagine the pain...gr8!

 

[sanju_strings]

luv always ends leavin a suprise package.....which is kinda full of pain agony tears n worst of all makin u remember ev lil time u spent with tht person jus kips flashin around

nice poem

cheer up lyf m8 shit happens

 

[tumhare_divya]

this poem is amazing....really conveys the emotion well...

I like this part:
"I will never forget you...nor will I try...go-go my dear just leave me ...though my heart cries."

its a really touchy situation...she is leaving yu physically...but your love is everlasting...its too sweet...I love the poem...teary situation though...(jeez! tryin to make peeple cry?!)

 

[walk_alone]

Thank u all..............

Thank u all .....thts all i can say

 

[CrYpTiC_angel]

u conveyed ur emotions beautifully

lookin fwd to see more of ur poems!

 

[#iR@]

this poem is beautiful... very simple yet very impactful :beer:

 

[guitarangela]

very nice..........emotional too :cry1: reps for ya.....

 

[Garima]

reeeeelly nice....cos i can very well relate to it...but kno wat buddy...i hv heard it from so many ppl now & i hv started believing that...thot of sharing it here...
Failure in Love teaches u ALOT.....tk it as a lesson & move on

 

[sanju_strings]

reeeeelly nice....cos i can very well relate to it...but kno wat buddy...i hv heard it from so many ppl now & i hv started believing that...thot of sharing it here...
Failure in Love teaches u ALOT.....tk it as a lesson & move on

take d lesson n luv on

 

[Garima]

life's all about the choice u make^^^^All the best.

 

[walk_alone]

My first post

This is my first post in IGT .. though there are many errors ( I learnt later ). I thought I would share it with you all.

 

[metalhead_junky]

looks good for a 1st post!....but are'nt the 1st n last para contradicting each other?

 

[walk_alone]

The difference is, in first para "charecter" decides to abandon the pursuit for his love in dispair, however in last para he doesn't want to lose out the memories even though his "love" is ready to abandon him nomatter.

 

[horsesmouth]

....i was thinking the same... till i read this....
well its good for a 1st post...