Agar Toum Ko Jaana Hi Tha… To ek aakhri baar gale lagaa kar jaati to acha hota Ya dour se hi sahi ek salaam kar jaati to acha hota Gar hum ko chor jaana hi tha phir se na aane ke liye To apni in yaadon ko bhi sangh le jaati to acha hota Apne dil ke saath saath mere dil ko bhi tou to le gayi Mujhe mera dil agar tou waapas de jaati to acha hota Kayi zoubaanon ne yehi poucha ki toum meri kaun ho Ounke iss sawaal ka jawaab tou de jaati to acha hota Jiss se mere paas tere laut aane ki umeed dil main rahe Apni ek amaanat mere ghar bhi chor jaati to acha hota Agar Uparwaala mujhse pouche to kya kahega 'Amanush' Ounko apne chale jaane ki vajeh bataa jaati to acha hota Amanush…
Nice poem Amanush....i think title hona chahiye tha 'to achha hota' :...par naam me kya rakha hai....hai na??
you are making me think...its love something about expectations? :think: pyaar karte hein tujhe bataa ke to kya mazaa hai aashiqui to vo hai ki ilm tak na ho teri ruh ko
Pyaar kar ke itraana koi tum se seekhe Pyaar kar ke jataana koi tum se seekhe manga na tumse ek bhi waada jo humne par kadr humari tum karna na seekhe See again expectations.... tch tch...
love has grey shades................turning the clock against the will of almighty makes us to think ....if................ pain is beautiful too.......it brings the hidden personality out of us......... good poetry......nicely expressed rohit astroguru26
amanush u r the best poet out here in igt.. no doubt... i wonder when i cud reach to ur excellence level....
