Agar main tera mobile phone hota

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by ~Bish, Aug 13, 2007.

  1. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist


    Comments/Compliments all welcome..

    Agar main tera mobile phone hota
    tere haaton mein hamesha rehta
    tere gaalon ko har roz chu pata
    tere hooton se saanso tak sama jata

    Jab bhi tu soti main tere paas hota
    Jab bhi to roti main tere saath rota
    ek pal bhi mujhse duur nahi reh pati
    har ek call sms mein tu mujhe satati

    Kabhi gussa kisi pe aata to mujhe pe utaarti
    aur pyar aane pe mujhe kissi bhi deti
    jo bhi hai har pal tu mere saath hoti
    aur har pal main tere saath ho paata..
    Agar main tera mobile phone hota..............

  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    this was good imagination ...reps added !
  3. elfascinating

    elfascinating risqué


  4. #iR@


    hmmm... interesting.... hope everythings good at ur end man...
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    people usually change their handsets every once in a while :p

    This reminds me of that song picturised on sushmita sen and mahesh manjrekar called 'Hum Tere Sanam'

    I kinda like this though, haha
  6. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Very imaginative...but kinda feels like manipulation more than love...I mean wouldn't you like to be the persons she gives "kissies" to on the other end of the call rather than being the phone...the phone is just being used and I would hate to be just used..
    Or thats what I deduced...I liked your creativity though..

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