posting here...some of my shayari again... hoping that..u will like it... plz comment... woh zuki palkon se baat kare to koi baat nahi.. hum nazar uthaake dekhe to gustakhi-e-sharafat hai.. woh aankho se hame katl bhi kar de to koi baat nahi.. aur hamaare siskiyon se bhi zamaaane ko shikayat hai.. dard-e-judaai ke din hazaar hum kehte hai kuch aur sahi.. kaash.. leke hum ko baahon me woh keh de..'bass abb aur nahi'.. kaash woh iss dil ka ehsaas samaz paate.. mere sine me ataki har saans samaz paate.. unki aankhone to dekhi hai mehfile hazaar.. meri aankho me unke deedar ki pyaas samaz paate... nahi likhne humko labz hazaar.. bass ek alfaaz me ye suroor ho jaaye.. main keh du..ke tum mere ho.. aur tu mere pyaar me majboor ho jaye.. ---------------------------------------------------
Pehi baar dekha hai koi doctor aisa.. likh paata hai jo shayari aaisa... par hum ko bhi kam mat samjhna... is engineer se shayari mein maat ulajhna.. ur shayaris r superb.. but tell me how come u have such a good hold in Urdu that too being in Mumbai... the city of Taporis...
vishwaa.. im basically marathi.. i dont know urdu.. urdu n hindi that i know..is just from the knowledge of hindi movies.. havent read much literature too.. as its hard to find time..for creativity.. still im trying to write in hindi, urdu, marathi, n english(the weakest lingo for me).. honestly...i couldn't believe at first hand...wen people appreciated wat i wrote in IGT.. love you all for that... :nw: hum kahaa aapko kam samazte hai.. par aap yahaa bhi hum ko tang karne aa gaye? boys Vs girls ki thread kafi nahi thi kya? jo yahaa pe bhi hum se jung karne aa gaye?
this one is just a comment ..as u asked for 1... Gustaakh nazareen hain iss-liye jhuka ke rakhteen hain ! nazuki-raks hai ishk ka so khud se chuppa ke rakhten hain ! jinke seene mein tufaan kayee hoon dear nimisha, aksar chere pe kamoshi saaja ke rakhten hain !!
gud one madhuresh.. well nimisha.. that really proves how much talented u r.. tell me also yaar which movies u r watching..i can also improve my poetry.. i guess movies like Mughal-e-aazam , Taajmahal , Nikah etc etc.. just kidding.. keep writing.. and ya keep fighting also with me..
Nimisha .. ur a great poet .. .. shall i start again : .. hahahaha no i won't .. as a sign of respect to u
hey... dont overburden me wit respect.. or next thing i know..i started calling me NIMISHA JI.. nimmo or nimi is gr8 for me... ur appreciation worths lot...thanks...
nimisha.......... offfffffffffff limits ......................I read this one after takdeer and still enjoyed it a lot!! UFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF!!!!!
Aap ke har sher tareef e kaabil hai ...Madam ! Younhi likhte rahigeya...and take care ! Ek choti si kavita aap ke liye... Roshni nazar aajaye agar to toum ousse boujha lena... Nind se hamari palkein Bojhal hoti jaa rahi hein. Amanush...
faraz.... :nw: thanks so much... this was posted long ago..thanks to dig it out..so tat..others cud appreciate it..too.. falcon_eyes.. hira.. amanush.. elysian.. wat..can i say to all of you!! just thanks!! ur appreaciation is my treasure...
