Afghan:: Sharaab ki jannat

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by afghan, Dec 19, 2008.

  1. afghan

    afghan New Member

    hi,,

    title: Sharaab ki jannat


    ek din sharaab ki baarish hoga
    wohi din ghamo par atish hoga
    is sharabi zindagi main
    jab teri yaad hoga wahi sharabe ki baat hoga



    this is my fist poem in hindi

    any corrections welcome
     
    afghan, Dec 19, 2008
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