Acha Hoga!! Original Ghazal

Discussion in 'IGT Soundtrack - Your Band, Your Gig, Your Music' started by rizaaj, Oct 24, 2005.

  1. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    last night my brother came up to me.. and showed me something he wrote. i was really touched by this ghazal... i planned to compose it to some thing.. listen to it and tell me if it clicks... no music yet.. just the audio.. will compose music if it sounds good ..

    most people in here are into pop and mainly rock.. but everyone according to me has a taste for everything.. lemme know if it works

    Dil meN ka dar aaye to achchaa hogaa!
    dard ye had se guzar jaaye to achchaa hogaa!!

    Aaj ki raat katii bhii to katae gii kesae
    Aaj ki raat guzar jaaye to achchaa hogaa!!

    YooN.hee be.kaar KhayaaloN meN simataa hae kehaaN?
    In KhalaaoN meN bikhar jaaye to achchaa hogaa!

    Dard ka chaaNd bhataktaa hae sar-e-baam-e-falak
    Merii aaNkhoN meN utar jaaye to achchaa hogaa!!

    Woh miraa Khoon k jugnoo sa fazaaoN meN uRae
    Zeest kii maaNg ye bhar jaaye to achcha hogaa!!

    Mere khaaboN ki qabaa, Ghazal ki raa' le.lae
    Yeh tiraa husn saNvar jaaye to achcha hogaa!!

    Heres the audio
  2. #iR@


    very NICELY ritten!!!!!!! :beer:

    will chk out the audio latter...... sucky connection!
  3. aysh

    aysh -|h3 ori9in4| (ui!aris-|-

    its nice man !!
  4. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    @hira and nemo... thanks...

    @all.... no one likes ghazals here?
  5. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    hey gazal seems excellent.. downloading the audio...will comment after hearing it
  6. #iR@


    FINALLY heard it...... nice voice man..... :beer:
  7. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    thanks dudette.. but now i have ruined my voice all bcz of ******* smoking
  8. #iR@


    ^ :shutup: won't say a WORD about smoking!

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