Ab Kya Likhun......

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by anum324, May 12, 2007.

  1. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    Likhne ko ek kalam to hai, par roshnai saath nahi deti,
    Jazbaat utaarne hain kagaz pe,par soch saath nahi deti.


    Armaan bhare is dil mein they basaaye bahut se ashiyaane
    Ek nanha sa sapna tha sanjoya ab usi ko chale hain dafnaane.


    Zindagi se jyada to nahi bas ek apne ka manga tha saath,
    Kismat hai ki woh hai saath phir bhi chooth gaya uska haath.


    Mujhe koi bhi maat de de,yeh kabhi bhi kiya manjoor nahi,
    Tu mera to hai ,par mere saath nahi ismein tera kasoor nahi.

    Kismat ko apni badalte badalte khud hi badal gaya hoon main,
    Unchai panne ki chaahat mein, tum se bichad gaya hoon main.


    Ab to mujhe sirf teri yaadon ke sahare jeena hi padega,
    Chaak jigar hai gham se tere, phir ise seena hi padega.


    Jaate hain sabhi khaali hath ,main bhi akela hi jaunga ,
    Afsos yahi ki main to apna pyaar bhi chodh kar jaonga.


    Farishte jab karenge hisaab, meri to hogi khaali kitaab,
    Naam tera likhna chahunga main,jaise ho aakhri fariyaad.

    Aur kaya likho tere liye ki alfaaz bhi ab rote hai zaar zaar,
    Kuch bhi nahi baccha hai, tu le jaa meri duaein hazaar.
     
  2. Ankitad

    Ankitad New Member

    wow... thts really really gud...
     
  3. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    thanx....i have been away for a while....so cud not post any gud work here.....though i realise only one of us really bother to post a comment....!!!

    Amazing.....ab lagta hai yahan pe apni poems post karna theek nahi....sab ko apne post ka khyal rehta .....no one cares for each other....well it's upsetting...Soory to say...may be rude but true...!!
     
  4. jazzbox

    jazzbox His X Ln C 1000CC

    nice poem anum
     
  5. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    Achcha likha.. nice work anum..
     
  6. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    Thanx a lot to jazzbox & bish :)) i just can acknowledge ur comments with ur alias...dunno ur real names).......i appreciate it....

    Well...the whole idea of posting poems fails here if the readers (not all...may be some) do not post their comment. If the writer doesn't come to know his/her flaws or positive points.I take feedback positively...coz that tells u where u can improve...

    Guys no one's perfect...we need to keep optimism within to let soul and mind grow...!!!

    Keep writing and smiling!!!
     
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    it was long and nothing new !
     
  8. jazzbox

    jazzbox His X Ln C 1000CC

    most of our week points make us more stronger ..

    well i m zubair
     

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