Aashayein: My 1st real attempt to Sing and strum together

Hello PPL,

I somehow managed to record this song, after having faced the difficulty of singing and strumming to-gether. Me just a beginner, so if there are any galtiyaan then maafi plz.....
also there is a bit of noise and a thud towards the end of the song.....i will try to put a better version of this song soon...

thx for ur patience in judging me ...!!!
here we go: https://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=537805

-Krishna

 

good attempt of playing and singing together!

u can definitely improve on ur strumming though

 

good attempt!
u have to work on strumming..
also what chords r u using while playing??

 

tnx angel and ansh for replying!!!
i used A & D chords.......
do you suggest something better?

 

try out these
https://indianguitartabs.com/showthread.php?t=13324&highlight=aashayein

 

I will try out the song with these chords later when I am at home and let you know how it sounds....btw thx ansh for the reps !!!

 

^^sure!!
anytime:beer:

 

nice krishna strumming will get better soon i believe and 1 suggestion when ur recording get some quiet time like when everyone's sleeping or something...

 

nice try
try recording at nite time

 

Thanks a lot himika and chatty !!!
this will sound like an excuse but one of the reasons for the strumming not coming out so well is because of my guitar which is not so good, the strings are very tight, buzzing and what not...well i will get a good jumbo accoustic guitar soon......and of course partly bcoz of my skills as well...i will definitely improve on my strumming...thx for the adivce...!!!
and yes i should try recording at night time....will do...

 

and thx a lot for the reps Himika!!!

 

guys this song is 33rd on the charts on soundclick....is this something good???
i was excited to see this song on 33rd position on the charts....
plz plz let me know....

 

Well, the charts are according to the hot/flop votes as well as how many ppl listen to that particular song.

But dont get too happy abt it, coz mostly it's coz of the no. of ppl listenin to it as I dont think every1 actually votes, so, it doesnt really say much abt how good the recording is.

Best would be to be ur own judge and listen to what others tell u

 

OIC, thx for replying angel!!!
I agree with you 100% on your last line....!!!

 

Just give up bro...Its a waste....

 

its superb that you have managed to reach this stage ...Just dont lose hope keep working hard and someday you will make it ...

 

its really hard to sing n play at the same time... i say good job! keep it up!

 

heavmetal, you mean the charts are waste? ok i believe u !
tnx for replying !!!

 

thx Smitzonian and Dev for the encouragement!!!
I need that to improve further

 

hey

can u send me the tabs/chords for aashayein..?
if u can send it on radhikabatra15@yahoo.com