Aapka Zikr ishq ki saadgi humko behela gayi ik sabaa ki tarah dil ko mehka gayi hosh ho na ho, hum to madhosh hai zikr se aapke hum kyo khaamosh hai rehguzar kar gaye bin aapke saanse tanha bin aapke zarra zarra jab puche aapki khaeriyat aatish jagati lau ki tarah dil khud ko jala jaye chaand ki sard narmi jab chain na dilaye zameen ki garmi jab hume chil jaye dil nawaazi aapka zikr hume behlaaye aahon ko halka sa sukoon dilaye beete lamhon se gairo ko kya taahluk besharam si unki nazare ab unhe hai chubti tohmat jo lagate the humpe kabhi ye dil lagane ki usi mehfil main hota hai.. aapka zikr ---`-,--;--<@ _____________________ Do gimme your honest comments whenver u read my poem thanks for reading..
^^did u write that in a hurry? kinda incomplete .... or did I miss something (maybe, cuz I didnt get some of the words here too, think I would better stop reading hindi/urdu stuffs here ...
ohh : i donno.. i wrote two poems one after the other so maybe coz of that .. will try and write the english translation..:
good one Bubbly ...but why u posted like that i think you should have posted in a manner... para by para sorry if im wrong...:
vaisa to atpata usage hai words ka par khyaal ki saadagi khud main khoobsuraat hoti hai app ne prove kar diya..... yaar tera jikr jab bhi hota hai, chup to rehtain hain bas itna hai.... galoon main guleriyaan pad jati hain mood pe ja kar khayaaloon ke-Dil, bhool jata hai kaha rehna hai..
Aapka Zikr ishq ki saadgi humko behela gayi ik sabaa ki tarah dil ko mehka gayi hosh ho na ho, hum to madhosh hai zikr se aapke hum kyo khaamosh hai rehguzar kar gaye bin aapke saanse tanha bin aapke zarra zarra jab puche aapki khaeriyat aatish jagati lau ki tarah dil khud ko jala jaye chaand ki sard narmi jab chain na dilaye zameen ki garmi jab hume chil jaye dil nawaazi aapka zikr hume behlaaye aahon ko halka sa sukoon dilaye beete lamhon se gairo ko kya taahluk besharam si unki nazare ab unhe hai chubti tohmat jo lagate the humpe kabhi ye dil lagane ki usi mehfil main hota hai.. aapka zikr ---`-,--;--<@ ____________ Done! how does it look now? Will keep this in mind when i post my other poems Reason why i'd put the lines all together was that somehow i felt they'r incomplete without the other poetically it may seem incorrect though but anyway, i appreciate your comments thanks again..
Shukriya guch baatein hoti hi aisi jo lavzon main baya nahi hoti aur jo hoti hai unme samajhdari wali baatein kam hoti hau
