Aankhien... Kal in* aankho ne kuchh bataya mujhe Ek sunhera khwab dikhaya mujhe In aankho me wo chahat chhalakti hai Jise yeh** aankhein… Har lamha dekhne ki khwahish karti hain Agar aankho ki zubaan hoti, to kenti hamse Ki tumhe be-intehan pyar hai hamse Par na kahe bhi is duuri ka dard in aankho me dikhta hai Bole bina kuchh kaha nai ja sakta, yeh kon kehta hai Tumhare dard me hamara dard bhi shaamil hai Tum agar kareeb na ho to sooni lagti har mehfil hai Aankho ki ajab hi yeh boli hoti hai Aaj yakeen hua hamein… Ki aankhien hi is dil ki zubaan hoti hain *His Eyes **My eyes Thank You for reading
par ham toh hamesha yahi dua karte hain ki hamari aankho se kissi ko nazar na lage ....bas in aankho me jab bhi dikhe sabke liye pyar or dua hi dikhe.... Thank you for reading...
to be honest not gud at all......lately ur poems have same kind of words and expressions. try writing abt something diff.
I won't recommend writing a poem where the person can't make out who are you talking about. But otherwise, great poem.
Poem is bout some1 who loves me & whom i love too...i thnk this was very simple to figure out...: anyway, thanx for reading...
shaeri e ishq mafi chaunga is thread mein apni poem post karne ke lie , but kisi ne meri poem par rply hi nahin kia kya karun koi bata hi nhain kaise likhta hun aaap logo se guzarish hai jo is thread ko pare voh meri poem par bhi 1 nazar daal le . shukriya “Dhundte rehte hain apne dil ke rehguzar ko darbadar Par kahin se bhi koi aas nahin hai . Is dil mein behad basa hai ishq par fir bhi koi paas nahin hai. Haath utha kar dua karta hun Likh kar apne dilbar ka naam zamin par sajde karta hun Tars gai hain yeh palkein us ek jhalak ke lie Taras gai hain yeh sansein us ke ehsaah ke lie Dewanne hue is qadar teri muhabbat mein Ke dewaange ko hi muhabbat samjh baihte Jab dunia ne rang dikhaya to is duniay ko rangeen samjh bihte Par teri gair mojudgi mein yeh sab rang feeke hain Ansoon par koi iqhteyar nahin ankhein thak gai hain Tere bina mehfil mein bhi tanhai hai Tere bina bhid bhi rusva kar gai hai ab aisa lagta hai ke tere hi karam se hum is duniya hue the hum maqbool ek swaal hai is zehan mein ke kuon kia tumne maut ko kabool nigahein darvaze par hain kabhi to kadam to rakhoge Or isse ummed mein hain ke kabhi to mulke adam se lotoge” Apki rae or mukhalfaton ka is nachhezko besabri se intezaar rahega Comments nd suggestions are waited with open heart shukriya
@Raj..Thanks for catching up with my poem @Adak...not a bad start m sure the nxt one wud b better...so keep writing @Hira...Thanks buddy...u too :rock: ..
thanx garima mein isi ka intezar kar raha tha koi to bataye kaisa likha hai but m wondered ke itne sare logon mein se sirf 1 hi ne rply kia hai ,,, its not good atleast agar ganda likhte hainto bata to diya karein
